Broad faced sunflowers bow compliantly. Sheepish clouds float above withering fields of overripe fruit awaiting winters burial. Lungs bursting, my eyes a salty sea, I am racing through seasons folding one onto the other like a bewildered child escaping the night. My throat is a choke of blood stained words I want to scream to the universe, wait for their echo back, but the earth is too tender to endure this despair. Reality has lost it’s grip, it hurts to fall into the truth, it is here I learn the meaning of used. There is nothing I care to do about it.
Your words embraced my heart in a wonderful way! You can bring to life so many emotions with your poems. I do understand why I love your poetry…it’s always amazing! Hugs and blessings!
Truly beautiful.
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Thank you so much Nico.
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The emotion you packed into this one …. WOW!
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Thank you Amy! ❤
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Heartbreaking but gorgeously written, Heart. ❤❤❤
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Thank you so much Eric ❤❤❤
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This is gorgeous, sad and melancholy!It really speaks to me
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Thank tou Lynz. I highly recommend that everyone visit and read your experiences. ❤
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Thank you so much lovely Holly xoxo
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xoxoxo
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This was so beautifully done for such a moving subject! Really loved your wordcrafting throughout – “my eyes a salty sea” just one example.
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Thank you Chuck, such a lovely comment, very appreciated.
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I know it was already said. But I felt the immense emotions captured in those lines. Amazing!
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Thank you so much Erika.
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Please visit https://saysthedarkgirlblog.wordpress.com/category/articles/ 🙂
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Okay 🙂
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Reblogged this on Die Erste Eslarner Zeitung – Aus und über Eslarn, sowie die bayerisch-tschechische Region!.
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Thank you Michael. So very appreciated.
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Your words embraced my heart in a wonderful way! You can bring to life so many emotions with your poems. I do understand why I love your poetry…it’s always amazing! Hugs and blessings!
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Thank you for your encouragement Wendell. I am glad my poetry resonates with you. Hugs and blessing to you as well.
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“Reality has lost it’s grip, it hurts to fall into reality…” Fabulous.
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Oh, it really does! Thank you Gigi 🙂
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Le very nice.
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Merci John. 🙂
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Thou art very welcome oh lovely Holly!!!🙂🙂
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🙂
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🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂
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whoa lol!! Many smiles back John.
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And too many more smiles back at you.
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Brilliant.
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Thank you Mr D. Your generosity is appreciated.
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Wow!! My first time visiting your blog. Impact!! Can’t wait to read more:)
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Thank you Denise! Lovely comment.
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Pensively sad, nicely done.
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Thank you Maverick
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
POWERFUL STUFF! REMINDS ME OF ESTHER LING’S POETRY!
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I’m flattered 🙂
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ALL my so-called flattery is true–as far as i remember! 🙂
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I thank you. Apparently some topics are not our thing….maybe next year or never. 🙂
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PLENTY of other worlds out there to explore, and we each provide a different perspective on them! ❤
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wünsche das beste Gelingen für alles, was du dir vorgenommen hast, Klaus
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Thank you so much Klaus.
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Beautifully written and touching
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Thank you Ward. 🙂
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You’re welcome 🙂
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