Let me be the summer sun
who shines for you without expectation.
A rhythmic breeze that shapes soft
passages where you travel uncertainty.
Let a herald of archangels fill your
your heart with unworldly treasure.
I will be your blood moon,
the swell and pull of tides that
draw you near.
Ascend with me on a windscape
strung of stars far from
the world below.
These words come from grace and beauty! Amazing
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Thank you Lynz. Such a lovely comment.
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Holly, nicely done. I like the metaphor of this line using the moon’s effect on rides.
“I will be your blood moon,
the swell and pull of tides that
draw you near.”
I may have shared the documentary movie “I am,” speaks of an electromagnetic current our heart produces that can be felt fifteen or so feet away. So, when someone makes your heart flutter, that sensation just might be the tide pulling him or her close.
I thought that was cool. Keith
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That should say “tides” not “rides.”
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Thank you Keith. Lovely, I appreciate that!
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Lovely… like a prayer
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Thank you for the lovely comment.
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My pleasure
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Thank you Keith. Beautiful comment. Very appreciated !
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Brilliant thank you
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Thank you David
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Thank you so much!
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Beautiful words as always, Dear Heart. ❤
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Thank you Eric, you words are always appreciated ❤️
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Here is a brilliant poem that expresses a passionate love.
A little gem, Holly
Love ❤
Michel
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Thank you so much Michel, Love, ❤
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You simply have a wonderful gift with worlds. This one swept me away into your web. Well done!
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Thank you Frank…said the spider 🙂
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🙂
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Absolutely beautiful xxxxxx
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Thank you xxxx
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That is a poem like the romantic explosion of a new universe. Very beautiful, Holly!
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Ah, thank you Erika, that’s really lovely!
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😊💖
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😊💖 back to you!
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!!!!
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Beautiful
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Thank you beth.
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Stunning, like an Art Gown I have yet to show the world! xo
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Let’s get that out here then! I can’t wait, you know I am not big on patience. Thank you Resa xo
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xxx
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xxx
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“I will be your blood moon” I LOVE this.
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Thank you Elle, so glad you do.
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Awesome 😊
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Thank you! ❤️
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Lovely work! ❤
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Thank you Dina ❤️
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Oh wow. This is amazing.
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Thank you Sarah!
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Usually I read your posts towards the end of the day because like this one they’re the day’s dessert and always a treat.
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That’s an amazing comment. Thank you Maverick.
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Me luvs it wen yu shine.
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Ah! That’s really sweet and so kind! Thank you John
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You, oh amazing and lovely Holly, are most graciously welcome.
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😊🌹
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😊🌹😊🌹😊🌹
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🤗
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🤗🤗🤗
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You write such graceful lines.
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Thank you Robert such a lovely comment. Very appreciated.
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Reblogged this on Art by Rob Goldstein and commented:
from House of Heart
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Thank you so much Robert.
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Such an incredibly beautiful and evocative poem
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Thank you Miriam!
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A poetic invitation
of interstellar exploration.
Without exception
rays of delight
… beyond expectation.
Solar winds soft
upon the saddle
of unbridled imagination.
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Lovely David, thank you so much!
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Beautiful, Holly. I love that “string of stars far from the world below.” Gorgeous.
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Thank you Diane!
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Reblogged this on Die Erste Eslarner Zeitung – Aus und über Eslarn, sowie die bayerisch-tschechische Region!.
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Thank you Michael 🙂
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Thank you too,Holly! 😉
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Wow!!! I must have read the beginning of this poem a dozen times alone before venturing on to the rest of this beautiful journey. “Let me be the summer sun that shines for you with no expectation” that was gorgeous as only you could put it lovely. Your heart is simply amazing as every word should have a music note attached to it. Poetry is glorious coming out of the House of Hearts!❤️
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Wonderful… 🙂
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Thank you Si 😊
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Always a pleasure xo
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xo
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I love that promise of being the blood moon. Wonderful analogy.
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Thank you Brenda
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Stunning!!
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Thank you Angela
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You’re welcome!
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Evocative, rich and uplifting
Holly
A delight
Much love as always
john
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Thank you John! A delightful comment.
Much love to you!
Holly
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so beautiful!
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Thank you so much!
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Wonderful poem, dear Holly. It’s so poetic.
Julia ❤
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Thsnk you ❤️
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Wunderbar, liebe Holly!
Danke und eine liebe Umarmung!
Ein sonnenreiches Frühlingswochenende!
Alles Liebe, herzlichst Elke.
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Thank you dear Elke! Umarmung!
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Great poetry! You may want to check out the conversation beneath this post. Your name has come up as someone who may have a vendetta against Nandita and Andrew.
https://nanditayata.wordpress.com/2018/03/29/between-the-dusk-and-dawn-3/
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A vendetta.? This is absurd. What are they basing this ridiculous claim on? I have been blogging for eight years with WP and so far I have had no vendetta against anyone or any accusations such as this directed toward me. Stop the drama.
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Enchanting 🙂
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Thank you Melanie ❤
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Like a lullaby, Holly.
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Thank you Merril, I’m so glad you liked this!
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A very pretty poem!
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Thank you!
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Brilliant piece!!
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Thank you so much!
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NIce to read a poem of yours, Holly, after a long gap. Keep it coming…
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You have fallen from my notification Raj and apparently I have from yours. Perhaps refollowing will help. I have missed you.
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Thanks for notifying. I will, of course, refollow….🌸
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🌹
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Tilt the moon slightly and you have my smile after reading the poem 🙂
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Ah, thank
You! 🌹 love that.
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