A young birch sways
like a newborn giraffe
its limbs lean out over
wilted grass and ochre
vines wind a marble sentry
whose eyes never flinch
but guard eternal while
winter snow stacks on
solitary bones until May
winds stir the crowns of
trees filled with the wails of
wingless birds powerless
to fly on.
The whole poem is penned beautifully with very well thought upon words. Very fresh.
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Thank you so much Rishhuu!
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Welcome!
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I enjoyed this very much, great work.
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Thank you . I’m glad that you enjoyed .
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You are welcome.
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Thanks!😊
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I like the imagery in this one. 🙂
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I’m glad. Thank you Frank. 😊
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“a young birch sways like a newborn giraffe.” A delightful image against the eternity of silent statues.
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Thank you so much Tio.
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Wonderful
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Thank you Lynz 😊.
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Lovely, Holly! You have a wonderful of imagery and emotions with your words.
Although, I was a bit confused at first. I’m exhausted, just sent you Queen’s end, and came here. So, I read “young bitch” LOL Second read strxoaightened me out!
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I must confess my first read came out the same.
“A Young bitch sways…”
Then I realized the errors of my ways…
🙂
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Lol! One cannot put anything past me!
. Thank you Brian. 😊
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There is potential there… 😉
(Sorry to intrude. I always feel others’ comments to be like private conversations…)
🙂
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Thank you Brian. I don’t know what happrned here!
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I think I fixed the problem.
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why didn’t I think of that ? A great line!
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…because you are a true romantic, and I am well…. we can discuss that privately! 😀 ❤
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lol! I would love to discuss that, I have a feeling we are not that far apart when it comes to a good laugh. 🙂 ❤
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YEAH!!!!
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We’re too cool. 😎
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Mooi gedicht en schildering
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Danke!
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I found the painting on google art. I don’t know who the artist is. I think it is beautiful too. Thank you!
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Beautiful images.
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Thank you GiGi!
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Wingless birds would be a very sad thing. 🙂
I prefer the newborn giraffe. Having seen many giraffes in Africa
I am quite fond of them. Such elegance. 🙂
Bon week-end Coeur de Feu.
B.
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Bon week end Brian. 🌹
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Merci. De même.
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I have seen a baby giraffe move, all gangly and awkward. Your image comparing that to the spindly limbs of a birch is spot on. As is the ghostly white bark of a birch copse to solitary bones. There is so much thought behind everything you write, Holly. It is a joy to read.
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Thank you so much Paul.
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It’s very amusing to watch newborn Giraffes get their sea legs. They are one of my favorite animals, so sweet with those big eyes and lashes, thank you again!
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I have heard, but don’t know if its true, that giraffe comes from the Arabic word for beautiful because of the eyes and lashes.
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It would surely apply, they have such sweet faces, eyes, and lashes they open and close very slowly. They are beautiful.
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Pure beauty and such detail lovely, I mean it when I say you bring good things to life.🌹🌹
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Thank you Roy, your beautiful comments are wonderful. 🌹🌹
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You’re so welcome🌹🌹
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Beautiful, Holly. Your imagery is so evocative. I hope those birds learn to fly. 🙂
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Thank you Diane, lovely comment. Eventually, they will fly. 🙂
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Lovely images, Holly, but sad–the solitary birch standing sentry while the snow piles up into May. (Perhaps that’s just me projecting.) 🙂 I imagine that tree seeing everything through many years.
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Beautiful comment Merril, that’s a poem to itself, the personification of the tree, beautiful.
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Then yours inspired me. 🙂
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wettermäßig ist es heute toll, also mach was daraus, Klaus
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Auf jeden Fall muss Klaus bei schönem Wetter rauskommen, genießen.
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Wonderful poem filled my mind and imagination.. The painting is beautiful, is it one of yours Holly? We have several nesting pairs of birds.. two Blackbirds nests and a sparrows in the bush and one in our eves under a lose sleight.. We spotted her the other evening carrying food to squeeze beneath the roof tile.. 🙂 Love the birds on Wing.. ❤ Happy Weekend Holly xx
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Thank you sweet lady. I got the painting off google art, no artist named. I do love it. My “eave” bird left when the warm weather started. This is the second year I’ve had a bird nest in my porch eaves. Last year an American Robin this time a sparrow who came as just a fledgling and I watched him grow. Funny thing, he would not show up each night from Sunday through Friday but disappear on the weekend. A party bird. Happy Weed end Sue. ❤
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Haha… Love that.. Can not fault his tiny wings.. :-D… You too ENJOY! and Keep Soaring! ❤
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I shall and you too 😀
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A fine offering, Holly.
I like in particular the giraffe image, original and strong
Much love
john
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Thank you so much John. I think there are few things sweeter than a baby giraffe trying to get it’s “sea legs”. Much love John! ❤
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Reblogged this on Die Erste Eslarner Zeitung – Aus und über Eslarn, sowie die bayerisch-tschechische Region!.
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Thank you so much 😊
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Thank you Hollie, for sharing your wonderful thoughts. Michael
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Thank you for reading the and commenting, you are very appreciated Michael.
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🙂
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Not easy to be born with stilts, is it! I love the tenderness in your words.
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Not to mention dining on tree tops. Thank you so much Otto. 😊
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this is a precious poem and beautiful, beyond words:)
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Thank you so much, your words are so very appreciated!
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Reblogged this on mihranpianoblog and commented:
simply stunning….“You talk when you cease to be at peace with your thoughts.”
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Thank you Mihran.
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Great painting to prove the Sentry.
🎶🌷
Shiva
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I thank you Shiva.
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