With anonymous faces
you watch over my cradle,
your voice as soft as the aurora,
hair the color of a Ditch Lily
brushes against my cheek
and when I look up
my own face echoes back
at me.
My first rainbows are soaked
in your tears,
I am busy with life Mother,
its been so many years.
I am filled with light,
is that so wrong?
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beyond words…beautiful….
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Thank you so much.
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This has such a soft and delicate cadence to it. It’s very beautiful Holly.
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Thank you so much Nitin!
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Beautiful. ❤🌹⚘
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Thank you so much Adnama ❤🌹
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You are Welcome.
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Holly.
At times, words are evasive little devils, and I’m not very good with them, as you might have noticed. Not only am I eternally appreciative of your support, I’m also very much enchanted by your poetry. Vastly different from mine, as it should be, it has something that my verses incessantly lack, it has soul, it has vulnerability.
Very rarely have I written a vulnerable poem, but you seem to nail it every time, and I’m sorry I don’t visit more often. As a poet I love would say, “I’m busy with life Mother”.
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I appreciate your visit Johnny, thank you for the wonderful comment. I adore your poetry, carry on.
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Evocative … images of my mother looking down at me, as I lay in the crib, crying. It’s my very first memory. I was 1 year or a bit less. As an adult, I asked my mother about this. Although she was shocked that I had this memory, she told me that I had some kind of fever, that only happened at night. She would come and watch me in the crib, but there was nothing she could do. It lasted several months, which is why I think there is such a deep imprint.
A truly beautiful poem Holly! When she was at the end of her life, I looked upon her. There was nothing I could do. Is that so wrong?
Powerful words.
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Such a poignant memory Resa. It’s amazing how some things are so strong we can remember them at a very young age. We feel guilt that we can do nothing to stop the process when we are not at all in control of life and death. Thank you lovely.
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Although guilt is a concept, even a feeling that we have learned, it weighs more than lead. Thank you, too, lovely!
(Have you written any of your mom memories out for posterity?)
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Yes. I have. Thank you 😘
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A beautiful and touching thank you to motherhood. thank you.
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Thank you Tio.
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This is fabulous.
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Thank you Mary.
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Lovely.
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I’m Thank you!
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Nice 👍
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Thank you
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It’s really beautiful Holly. I wanted to come back today and reread it. The last bit is so powerful. real span of life really in this poem.
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Bonjour ou bonsoir belle jeune fille HEART
La vie a grand besoin de respect et d’amour
Il faut savoir donner pour mériter de prendre
Ce qui nous est offert et savoir aussi le rendre
Nous traversons, souvent, pendant notre vie
Des tortueux chemins qui viennent nous surprendre
C’est alors qu’il nous faut ouvrir nos cœurs et tendre
La main à nos amis pour leur dire bonjour
Belle journée ou belle soirée
Bisous Bernard
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Merci Bernard thank you for this beautiful comment. Such s lovely way to start the day. I hope your day is wonderful.
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Holly, this was touching and poignant. You always manage to reach in my heart with your words. This time in both ways – as a child and a mother.
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Thank you Erika. Wishing you a beautiful day.
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Thank you very much, Holly💖
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♥️
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You have the heart of a poet.
Viele Grüße
Bernd
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Thank you Bernd. From you , that means so much to me. Viele Grüße my friend.
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Touching!
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Thank you Gyslaine!
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Brilliant. ❤❤
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Thank you so much Eric ❤️❤️❤️
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Nothing wrong that I can see my dear, everything you write is right❤️❤️. Your poetry blossoms pure beauty and magic lovely.🌹🌹
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You are very special ! 🌹♥️
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You too are very special lovely ❤️❤️🌹🌹
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Reblogged this on Die Erste Eslarner Zeitung – Aus und über Eslarn, sowie die bayerisch-tschechische Region!.
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😊 thank you !
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Thank you!
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