At the bed of a murky river
I found you wet and worn,
a rare gem beaten to the silt
beneath the hooves of a wild horse.
Like a secret, a sacred poem,
I held you in my palm
rubbed you smooth and honed,
a refined diamond in my hand.
At the bay of obsession you slipped
from my grip lost forever to the
inlets gaping mouth.
How weak we were at the final kiss
something we wanted to be strong for.
Beautifully done
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Thank you Tara.
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“How weak we were at the final kiss
something we wanted to be strong for.”
Wow. How I love this.
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Thank you so much!
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Stupendous!🌸
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Thank you 🌺🌹
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Gorgeous Holly!
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Thank you so much Lynz
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most welcome
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Beautiful
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Thank you!
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💐💐
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🌺
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“a rare gem beaten to the silt
beneath the hooves of a wild horse.”
Aaah, beautiful imagery, Holly.
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Thanks so much Diane. 🌺
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Amazing lines from top to bottom, the crescendo was so precious beautiful, you could just close your eyes and imagine it. Your way with words never cease to amaze me.🌹🌹
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Thank you Roy🌹🌹
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You’re welcome gorgeous.🌹🌹
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Beautiful poetry indeed.
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Thank you Nico
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So very beautiful, Holly. Just wonderful.
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Thank you Gigi.
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Beautiful, and well-done imagery, Holly.
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Thank you Merril!
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Thank you Merril 😊
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Final kisses are indescribable. They might be intense, confused, salted with tears, weak from the years, or filled with the strength of parting’s panic.
I love the build up in this poem. It makes the intangible end, understandable. Excellent, Holly! ❤
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Thank you so much Resa ❤️
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truly haunting imagery Holly delivered as a lament. Lovely! Px
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Thank you Paul, lovely comment. x
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Excellent parallels between silt and a relationship.
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Thank you Frank.
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Magnifique Holly j’adore ! 🙂
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Merci Gyslaine! 🙂
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ist echt schön geschrieben, möge es ein guter Tag für dich sein, Klaus
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Holly, I love your metaphors of finding someone who has been mistreated or felt unworthy and flourishing together in love and lust. They both are spent and so tired that one last kiss proves cumbersome. Well played. Keith
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Thank you for the lovely comment Keith!
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Danke Klaus, einen schönen Donnerstag
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Oh this conjures such amazing feelings. That last part, Amazing! ❤
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Thank you dear Eric ❤
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You are also a rare Gem.. though never beaten Holly.. Beautiful.. And a lovely painting choice. 🙂
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Thank u dear Sue. I had a minor medical procedure today. Will get back witjyou tomorrow. Sending love.
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Sending healing thoughts your way for a full recovery and an extra energy boost.. ❤ ❤ ❤ Ommmmmmm……..
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Thank you Sue, if anyone can send good vibes it is you ♥️♥️♥️
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🌈🌷💖🙏
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A amazing poem dear friend. Artwork and words. Outstanding.
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Thank you John, I’m so glad you enjoyed !
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Reblogged this on johncoyote and commented:
Please read and enjoy the work of a talented writer.
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Thank you so much John.
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You are welcome my friend.
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Sending smiles
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Beautiful!!
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Thank you
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Very pretty, very well done, I enjoyed the read so I am going to reblog this poem for you.
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Thank you so much Poet!
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Reblogged this on House of Heart.
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Lovely! ❤
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Thank you ♥️
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OMG this is so beautiful, Dear Heart! ❤ Love!!!!
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Thank you Eric! ♥️♥️♥️
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💖💖💖
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Beautiful!
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Thank you Lynz!
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So detailed that one clearly imagine the scene built by your words . Good one
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Thank you so much Jonathan
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This is a wonderful piece, Holly. I loved every word and found it so moving. 😘
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Thank you 😊
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Exquisite
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Thank you Alex! Lovely comment.
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