Feel the changing seasons,
the tilt of the Earth’s axis,
the days growing longer as
the night desires to linger.
Summer seemed boundless,
the sundial casts long shadows.
I will miss you with your
brand of ripeness,
August’s lustrous brightness
inciting the senses with fields
afire beneath a summer sky.
Now its wheat is stacked and
bound in lonely batches.
Buried beneath autumn leaves
the earth imbues the darker hues
starless skies of delft blue and
gray swathes that cloak the dawn.
The ash of burning locust wood
shrouds the wilting garden with
the musky scent of autumn ghosts
heralding the chill.
Loved this…but let’s not mention the “W” word just yet. 😃
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Sorry but it’s coming 🙂
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Ugh. 😕
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You wouldn’t be saying that if you were here…are you here? 🙂
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I’m not as far south as you, but we’ve been in the heat all summer here in KY. It’s actually not bad today though. Mid 80’s and lower humidity. I’ll still take the dog days over freezing…and it’s not even close! 😃
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Nice read.
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Thank you!
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I’m loving the mood of this. You captured this like I try to capture sound when making sound art. Brilliant.
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Thank you George, such a beautiful comment, I’m delighted!
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It was the best piece by far I’ve read for awhile on WP. Neat.
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Thank you George, that really makes me feel great!
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Reblogged this on Ace Friends & Bloggers News.
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Thank you Ian!
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Welcome as always …🙏
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I can’t thank you enough Ian! ❤
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Excellent holly, I like your in line and alliterations. You are constantly expanding your techique and lyrical flow. Px
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Thank you Paul, high praise and so appreciated! Hx
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Argh yes the ‘Tilt’ you feel it too 😉
Beautiful words dearest Holly, Summer has been beautiful here, hard work because of the drought, but beautiful none the less..
Harvest time soon upon us… There have been some spectacular Crop Circles in England this year… Hope you explore to find them..
Love and Mega Hugs dearest Holly ❤ Enjoy your week ❤
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Aye Matey, the days are getting shorter, our summer has been daily downpours, I feel like I am living the monsoons of f Ranchipur (sp). So sorry about the drought, the world is upside down. Crop Circles, that’s exciting. Good luck with the harvest! Sending love and more mega hugs your way. ❤
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The weather man must have heard me… We have rain today 🙂 So a day off from watering.. 🙂 Enjoy your weekend Holly.. Love and hugs dear friend
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Yay! That’s good news. Have a great day. Splash about! ♥️
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❤️❤️
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I already try to prepare myself for the inevitable arrival of fall. So far I did not do very well… lol! Summer, please stay 😭
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Summer’s are generally miserable here, I’m looking forward to the fall. Hoping Summer will hang around a bit longer for you! 🙂
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I see, the humidity, right? Thank you for still wishing me a long summer, lol!!
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Humidity and tons of rain have besieged us here in the sub tropics. Come on fall. I remember the beautiful winters spent in Germany, and Summers…dry and pleasant. All the best no matter the season! 🙂
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This year we are truly having a gorgeous summer. But we the past years we had lots of wet and cool summers too. Anyway, I get you and I can understand you.
Oh, yes, for sure. Thank you and to you too, Holly!
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Thank
You Erika. Have a great day!
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Thank you, Holly. Already evening here (again). but you still have some hours left 😉
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it’s right in the heat of the day here. Even the dog doesn’t want to go outside.
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Then it is really uncomfortable… hope it gets better soon for you!
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Thanks, by The end of October. ☹️
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At least the time is working for you 😉
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Yes, a good thing ! 🙂
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😁
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Your words have given me a reprieve from the August heat and hope for cooler times. Well done! It flowed like falling leaves.
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Thank you so much Crone!
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Turn, turn turn… 🐧🐣🦆
I couldn’t find a tern, but at least they’re Byrds!
As cryptic as I am, I know you will get it.
Your poem is as perfect as the seasons themselves. You are an ultimate poet! xo
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Thank you dear Resa, I saw some Terns today , they were sweating and packing their bags. Lovely comment I so appreciate! xo
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Ohh, you saw terns! OK…I’m in fear of my eye thing tomorrow. I hope to come back here to say, it was a …. tern of fate, and I see better than ever!
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You must let me know how the eye thing went is as soon as possible! ❤️🌹
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Yeah! ❤ I'm such a coward.
I'm looking at sketches of Lady Anne ….
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Don’t be scared. All will tern out swell. ♥️
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YEAH!! 🎵💜
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😍
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To every season …. Lovely words yet again xxx
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Thank you Shehanne xxxxxxxx
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May it be a great season for YOU!!
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Fir you too John.
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… turn, turn.
For us down under, Holly,
the days are getting longer
. . . Hallelujah,
It’ll soon be our turn
to have a bite of Summer!
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That’s fantastic David. Wishing you a wonderful summer. I am dying to go to Australia , I need to keep my seasons straight before I make any travel plans. 😊
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Holly, Australia is so vast and grand,
best travel with someone who knows
the lay of the land.
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I will definitely not be heading outback without a guide. Is there a motel six there? 😊
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No Motel 6, and our 5 star trailer parks
are full of Grey Nomads. Enuff to drive
you mad. The backpacker hostels are nice,
but I find the Pubs with a room to rent
are often the best.
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Tough choice, trailer park might seem to much like home, I kind of like the Room out back, not too far from the Pub. A dream come true. 🍻
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Ivy you don’t bring a big thirst,
one will be supplied to you.
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I’m counting on it!
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Beautiful…the last two lines say it all…
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Thank you dear Gigi! 🧡
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Your poem helps to prepare for the turn of the season – I’m ready for the chill in the air and warm sweaters wraps.
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Thank you Mary, I’m over the hot raining weather . 🤗
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A beautiful poem to let us know that like feelings, seasons change. But you and your lovely words make any season seem beautiful.🌹🌹🌈.
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Thank you Roy ! Lovely comment my friend !😊🌹🌺
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You are so welcome gorgeous, my pleasure. Love your work🌹🌹😊
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Thank you again, you brighten the day with your amazing and inspiring words. 🌹🌹🦋
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As you brighten the day just by being you as well as with your words and your beauty.🌹🌹
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😊❤️
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😊❤️🌹
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Beautifully delivered, Holly,
warm, sensuous, thoughtful writing
A genuine pleasure for this reader
Always with Love
john
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John, it’s so lovely to “see” you, thank you for the beautiful comment. With love! Holly ❤
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This only brought out the sadness I’ve been fighting as I see and feel Fall creeping in, stealing Summer away. I know all Seasons are good, yet every year I dip in sadness, just so darn dismayed that Summer has again slipped away. Thank you, Holly, for another brilliant write. 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼
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I would never want to make you feel sadness dear Amy. It is so that many have winter depression from lack of sunshine and the dreariness. I wish you the lovely winters I remember from the short time I went to school in New England. Now, I am back home where Palm Trees are strung with lights and everyone is wearing sundresses on Christmas day. That carries it’s on bewilderment. Much love to you ❤
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Thank you, Holly. I’m trying a new Vita D supplement that should help me with the winter blues. I’m happy for you that you live where there is sunshine and warmth all year round. Yet I do get the confusion part around Christmas. Everyone has this image of snow in mind when it comes to Christmas. Much Love to you!! 💖
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Vitamin D is essential, esp. for red hair freckle faces who avoid the sun like the plague!
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A beautiful tribute to the changing of seasons. With the shorter days we can await the new season with joy, thinking about the beauty of the autumn.
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It’s a little funny how we look forward to each season, I couldn’t wait for summer but I’m over that now, bring on the cool weather 🙂
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Oh yes… the cool is coming 🙂
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I can barely wait Si, thank you 😊
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Neither can I…
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It seems unanimous.
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I’m sure 😉
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Very beautiful, Holly. I’m usually a great lover of summer but this year has been far too hot. I’m looking forward to the mellowness of autumn, and even the chill of winter. Every season is wonderful, in its own way – as your lovely poem suggests.
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it seems most agree it’s been a very hot summer. Thank you for the lovely comment!
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LooooooVELY!
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Thank you Professor!
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*bows*
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A tip of the hat 🎩
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Just like the changing of the seasons, your words were seamless.
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Thank you so much Frank.
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Such a beautiful painting you have rendered with your words, Holly!!! Autumn is my favorite season for some strange reason! Perhaps, it is because it was always the start of school and October was my birthday and I love Thanksgiving!! Thank you so very much for sharing this!!! Bravo!!
xoxoxo
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Thank you so much xoxo
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thank you Chuck! x
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This is one most beautiful poems I have read about seasons.
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Thank you Megha!
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toll im Haus des Herzens, beste Grüße von mir zu dir.
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Danke lieber Klaus! 😊🌹
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Holly, love this, especially the close “heralding the chill.” Keith
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Thank you so much Keith!
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Lovely, fall is my favorite time of the year, the crisp cold winds begin to rise, the beauty of the fire colored trees. Plus sunsets always get sadder and lonely which is beautiful in its own way. Great post, it captured all the sensation of autumn. ❤❤👌👌
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Thank you so much, lovely comment and so true.
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My absolute pleasure 💕
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ein tolles Gedicht, genieße diesen Tag mit viel Humor.
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Thsnk you Klaus. Have a wonderful day too 😊🎈
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Another great poem, but the first one, I think I would look sexy in that… is that too freaky or sexy?
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That’s freaky sexy! Alright!
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What a perfect description of late August. I saw the first red leaves a few days ago, and this morning the air outside was crisp. Love this. ❤
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Everyone seems to be wanting the change of season. It’s been a long hot summer here. ♥️
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I find that I’m ready for every season change by the time it arrives.
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Same here, Diane, this year I am esp eager for the cool weather to come breezing in!
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A perfect summation of this moment, weeks of gorgeous summer blowing into autumn with fat wasps and raindrops here in Oxford, we’re praying the winds blowing in keep the serious looking grey rain clouds ☁️ away just for a few more days.
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Lovely comment Charlotte, may all the seasons be beautiful for you!
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Oh I love it!
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Thank you Lynz !
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Beautiful!
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Thank you!
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