brilliant bird with
fire in your hair.
Shelter me beneath your wings
Where gravity has pressed me.
The wind has blown away all reasoning And we’ve
become the muted tongues
Of feathered birds
The fragile bones of faithless lovers.
Silence burns never to be spoken it sails away
on the wings of migrating birds.
Svetlana Ponamarenko
Beautifully beautiful poem
Penned well
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Thank you so much!
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Beautiful imagery, Holly, tinged with regret and longing.
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Thank you so much Diana 🧡
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Gorgeous
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Thanks so much!
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Just beautiful, Holly! Your poetry always makes me think, often a visual thought. Today, this poem … I saw a jar of copper coloured honey. Like your voice, copper coloured honey. xo♥︎
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So sweet Resa, thank you, you are a beautiful and generous soul, your words always inspire and bring a smile. Sending hugs xo ❤
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Always inspired words, Holly.
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Thank you Syl!
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Deeply beautiful.
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Thank you so much Nico.
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Wonderful images and the feathers and reality, blended…outstanding.
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Thank you so much Dear Gigi!
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Always a pleasure and a wonderful treat to read each of your poems.
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Yes, beautifully penned!! 🙂
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😊 thank you, so appreciated!
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You are welcome! 🙂
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Beautiful, I love your work, “that blew away all sanity and love became
the feathered tongue of muted birds,
the rotted bones of faithless lovers”
This gave me the chills. You are a genius and a witch, the way you write is witchcraft. You are brilliant Holly ❤❤
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Thank you for the lovely comment. Not the first time ive been called a witch or something rhyming with it .😊♥️♥️
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Whoever called you the word rhyming with witch, was a jerk. For me you are a sweet lovely witch (pointy hat, magic writing powers and a cauldron in which you cook your brilliant poetry). ❤❤
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That’s just beautiful, thank you so much 🌹♥️♥️
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My pleasure, Always ⚘⚘❤
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And mine!
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🌸🌸😊
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Becoming one with nature and only someone as beautiful as you can do that, this was lovely…I love how you incorporated you in the bird, it just brought the writing together for me. You have a way with words making them lovely❤️. Thank you gorgeous.🌹
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Thank you so much Roy ♥️🌹!
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You are so welcome gorgeous ❤️🌹
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I’m playing a faithless lover and wife right now, I feel so mean on my lovely husband who is a wonderful character and it’s make believe! Rotten rotting bones indeed 👍🏻.
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Lol! I’m certain you are knocking them out! Have fun.
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It is trueyou have a way with the words, Holly.
Great poem
Love ❤
Michel
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Michael , so good to hear from you! Sending love ❤️
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Holly, so true, those words can never be unspoken, only regretted, apologized for and forgiven (or not). Keith
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Thank you Keith , so true!
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So very sad!
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It’s just a poem. Pure fiction but that’s what I write.
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I get a sense of betrayal — perhaps I misunderstand the poem.
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Thank you Robert , lovers drifting apart. 🌹
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That can be a terrible process for the person who wants the relationship.
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Yes it can be devastating. Thank you for your insight Robert.
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You’re welcome. You expressed it well in your poem. 🙂
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Thank you so much Robert. 😊🌺
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🙂
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The word is “beautiful”. 🙂
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Thank you so much Maverick 😊
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Thank you Jonathan!
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Coppered words of anger… great image and line Miss Heart…though I am more for honeyed whispers
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Thank you Mr. Cake, honeyed whispers are preferred, most everyone would agree.
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Beautiful as always
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Thank you Lynz❤️
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Beautiful Holly! 🙂
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Thank you Gyslaine.
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😉
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Beautiful words, Holly!
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Thsnk you Merril.
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You’re welcome!
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Gorgeous
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Thank you so much Lynz!
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You touched me again.
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Thank you I’m glad you were moved by this.
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