Lips wet with mist, the breeze of a kiss,
water grass sweeping through diaphanous dreams.
The strains of a sonata stream,
rivers of veins filled with bloods wildness
a song blue playing with fire.
Tongues of lovers burn with allegory
celestial walls of silence.
Hear the firewood snap and hiss
the burning heat of need.
Has her awakening come to late?
Art by Liu
Unbeknownst to me this poem was picked up in October and published at Bon Bon Lifestyle Webazine. Thank you Bon Bon Lifestyle, and thank you Jonathan for letting me know.
woman waiting — House of Heart
This poem epitomizes why I love your poetry, Holly. I marvel at the way you blend imagery in new ways. This has so many beautiful lines. ❤
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Diane, Thank you for your wonderful support. You encourage and inspre me. .
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Excellent!!! 🙂
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Thank you so much Paul!!
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my pleasure Holly! 🙂
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🙂 mine too
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🙂
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You have a way with words! Allegories, metaphors, imagery … wow! You load a lot in a small number of words.
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Dear Frank your encouragement is deeply appreciated!
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Sweet! Blends and flows beautifully.
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Thank you so much Maverick 🌺
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Le shiver, le shiver, a river of silver quivered my being, as I read your perfectly slivered words.
❤️♥︎🧡♥︎💚♥︎💙
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Resa, lovely poetess and creator of beauty, Thank you ! ♥️
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❤
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Do I detect a hint of Esther Ling…? Good stuff, anyway—per your poetic greatness!
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I adore Esther, but I am not channeling her today though she is always welcome here. Thank you so much Jon.
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jUST ANOTHER POETIC KUDO TO MY FAVORITE REDHEAD POET! ❤ LOVE YA, HOLLY! ❤
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Right back to you dear Jonathan ❤
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❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤
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Sweet!
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Back at you!
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deep words
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Thank you!
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so profound
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Thank you.
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orphic?
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Not intended. What do you think?
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arcane, cryptic
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Le very nice.
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Thank you John.
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You are welcome, Holly.
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Thank you 😊
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😊You are very graciously welcome. 😊
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Love the line “touched in diaphanous dreams”. Well done!
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Thank you so much, I am glad you liked this
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Reblogged this on Ace Friends & Bloggers News.
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Thank you Ian
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ist ja schön geschrieben, möge die Woche eine gute Woche für uns werden ohne Stress und Sorgen.
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Danke Lieber Klaus, Ich wünsche dir dasselbe.
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Hier kommt nun auch wieder ein Gruß von mir zu dir.
Ich treffe dich hoffentlich bei bester Gesundheit an, wenn nicht wünsche ich gute Besserung.
In diesem Sinne, alles Gute, Klaus.
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Alles ist gut, danke Lieber Klaus. Ich wünsche ihnen einen wunderbaren Tag!
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Such lovely words and imagery–“Weeping clusters of allegories
spill from the tongues of lovers,”
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Thank you so much Merril.
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You’re welcome, Holly.
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Very good. I like the “cloak of the Awakening”. A heavy cloak indeed.
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😊
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Your mastery of words is stunning, Holly. The imagery in this is magnificent. My heart sighed. My breath quietened. Thank you for sharing this exquisite poem with us. 🌸
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Such a beautiful comment Amy, thank you so much! 🌸
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You are so deserving and so much more. I really mean that! You are so talented!
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You’re so good for morale Amy, a true gem. Thank you 😊
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It’s a very beautiful poem….don’t know how to describe its beauty..
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Thank you, lovely comment!
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very nice!
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome 🙂
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😊
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Thank you ❤️
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The poem is great corresponding with the image. Its fantastic. Michael
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Thank you 😊 Michael
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My pleasure, Holly! I hope you excuse the later re-visit.
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Your visits are always welcome.
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Very kind of you, Holly! I am really honored.
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I am!😊🌹
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You have great vocabulary! Beautiful
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Thank you so much Braeden!
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My pleasure Holly
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Mine too. 😊
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It’s never to late for love.🌹. And this was lovely, the wording, each verse rang a romance of tone that was able to dial the heart❤️. Beautiful like yourself.
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Your words are inspiring my kind friend 🌹♥️
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Your post are nothing short of refreshing lovely.🌹🌹
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Love this. You are in a league of your own.
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Thank you, that’s such a sweet and generous comment. Likewise dear Yassy!
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You are so welcome , Holly. Take care 😊
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You too! 😊
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Thank you very much!
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Reblogged this on House of Heart.
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