In the hushed silence between waves
sighs fill the night as stars come alive
and the breeze is a soft poem.
Nude in the moon light but for drifting
shadows the swirl in your glass keeps
perfect time with far off thunder.
I need to look away from your gun powder eyes
that lethal shot
before the fluttering of a thousand butterflies
betray me.
I breathe in the circlets of your cigarette and
the honey sweet scent of willing hostages.
As fragile as fireflies we escape to the madness of
our minds where all we have to do is live.
Liliana Gigovic
the entire thing is wonderful, but that last line is divine.
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Thank you so much mike.
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Ah❤️
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Thank you ♥️
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This is wonderful
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Thank you Beth.
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Agree with Mike. Beautifully written.
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Thank you so much Otto.
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It amazes me time and time again how you are able to paint a picture of a single moment with all its impressions extended to a story.
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Thank you Erika, such s beautiful comment. It helps to have a vivid imagination. 😊
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A mutual inspiration… I know what you mean! So, sharing how I feel about your poems is a selfish act too… lol!
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We’re allowed a few! ♥️🌹
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Very rich prose, dear Holly! It is of the richness that money cannot buy.
The painting’s thick essence accentuates your mood. Love it! ❦❦❦🍷❦❦❦
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Cheers Resa, thank you so much , have a lovely evening! 🍷🍷
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This is great. I especially like the line:
‘So I breath the circlets of smoke from your cigarette and the sweet scent of willing hostages naked and bare boned.’
That sentence there is an entire story in itself.
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Thank you , lovely comment.
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You are welcome.
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🌹
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Oh, yum and the shadow over his body…double yum and standing ovation.
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Thank you Gigi. 🏝
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I could taste the Jamaican Rum
under a Caribbean Sun
Well done ✔ Holly . . .
May I please have another one?
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Another rum? Thank you for the lovely comment David. Smiles!
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Perhaps I better not, Holly?
That last one was too strong
foe me … Rum that is 😅.
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I’m drawing a blank it must have been strong! 😛
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No, I think you’re right Holly.
On reflection, it wasn’t
that demon drink! It was
definitely your angelic poem.
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Thank you David, I like that theory! 😊
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Touching. Ah, Coltrainee…takes me away.
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Oh, same here!
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Along with John Coltrane, I enjoy some of the smooth sax stuff by Sonny Rollins.
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Not familiar with Sonny. Thank you.
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Love this, Holly. Beautiful.
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Thank you Diana!
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There is such intimacy when you are with someone, and all they wear is your shadow.
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imagine that scene without a shadow. 😊
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😉 well, even with the shadow…it’s not in the way! 😉
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Lol!
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This is beautiful Holly. 🦋💜
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Thank
You Michelle. 🦋🏝⛱💙
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You have a way of creating stunning visions like memories that just won’t let go. They go down smooth, warm, and sweet like that carefully aged rum made in a little pot still in the shed out back. Perfect for moonlight sonatas where the tides wash the sand.
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Such a beautiful vision you have have created Mr. H. Thank you for the inspiring and very lovely words.
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You are welcome Holly. I look forward to more of these wonderful vignettes.
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I’ll do my best 😊
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Snoopy Dancing to commence soon 🤩
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Pics please! 😊
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Bwaaa haaa haaa! A whole new YouTube genre is born, the Snoopy Dance challenge. 😂
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Laughing out loud! So cool! 😎
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wunderschön, für Heute ist entspannen, erholen, genießen und etwas länger schlafen angesagt.
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das gleiche dir Klaus. mach es zu einem wunderschönen Tag!
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I love the sensuality! Well done, Holly.
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Thank you so much Frank. Wishing you a wonderful day!
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… and to you as well.
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I hope to! 😊
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Mmmm! Wonderful! A pleasure for all the senses and my romantic heart! 💗
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Thank you Meg ❤️
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You’re most welcome, Holly!
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Lovely!
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Thank you Brett.
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Beautiful lovely❤️❤️. Your words take my words away.🌹🌹😊
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Thank you, that’s beautiful Roy. ♥️🌹
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As are you. You are very welcome.🌹🌹
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Thank
You! 🌹
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Very welcome🌹
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I also only can write “Ah❤️”. Great written, Holly! Best wishes, Michael
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So glad you like this ! ♥️
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I do really, and i am very thankful its possible to do. Michael
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Wonderful. Regarding Coltrane: Alice or John? Check out Eric Gale and Peter Tosh’s “Negril” album from 1975. Traveling reggae at its best. —CC
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I will do that for sure…John of course. 🙂
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Very descriptive. Each scene painted vivid with words .
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Thank you Yassy!
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Very welcome, Holly 🌺
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