It’s isolated along the highway. I’m alone and afraid, my car sits abandoned on the shoulder of a back road. My feet are raw and blistered, my shoes held in my hand. Squints of eyes burn from the sun and the wind whips at my skirt when he slowly pulls beside me. I need only get inside.
My hand reaches for the handle but suddenly I lie “I’ve phoned a friend to come for me “ Holding out my phone I force a smile. He is angry and speeds away without so much as goodbye.
In the morning, my troubles behind me, I browse the news over tea. My heart begins to pounds and it is hard to breathe. Her body was found beneath some trees not far from her deserted car, a dead phone was lying nearby, her shoes clutched in her hand.
This is one for Netflix. A series, I think. You have episode one of season one in the bag! ~ George
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In the bag…that’s creepy too. lol! Thank you George! 🎃
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Chilling! And of course, brilliant 😉
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Thank you so much! 🙂
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My pleasure, gorgeous x
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Oh, thank you! x
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Can it be that you posted it once before? It sounds familiar. A very good piece of writing, Holly!
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Every Halloween 🎃
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Yay 😈
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I’m scared shipless! I’ve been shivering in fear all day, and now this hideous story! Hope I make it through the night. Anything can happen, so it probably will! 😈👻👺☠️😱🏒
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Well you better stay safe. There are gowns to be made! Stay off those backroads. 🎃🍁😛😱👻
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I’ve got it all figured out! If I am forced to take a backroad, I won’t take my cell phone. Hehehe, that should take care of things! 🤓
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Pure genius! 🤔if only … forgot her name …had thought of that.
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Did she make gowns? This could be an important factor.
🧗🏽♀️🥋🧜🏼♀️I’m quite over the fact that there are no gown emojis. I’m hoping rock climbing + a karate jacket + a mermaid = a rock’n’roll gown with a splashy tail!
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A divine combination. Think about it! Wow!😛
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😛
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Creepy, spooky and diabolical. What a chilling read lovely, enough to give anyone goosebumps. 😬
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I tried. It’s been around awhile. Next year something new. 😊🎃
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It was awesome, spine tingling. You are something,😁. 👻
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🌹👻🎃
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Frightastic beautiful🌹🌹
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Thank you ! 🌹
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Welcome! 😊🌹
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This gave me the chills, Holly. I remember it (I think) from a previous posting. The scenario will never stop being so scary.
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It’s a Halloween ritual. I have another one that got lost in an older blog. I really have to buckle down. 😛🎃
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Wah-hah-hah!!

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Love this so much GP. 😛🎃
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It seems you have posted this one before but I missed it. Very scary in a few paragraphs! Well done! Happy Halloween! Be safe…
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How does it feel to be the only one who hasn’t read this and has not hesitated to remind me? Lol! I’m getting lazy. Thank you for reading and getting scared. 🤗
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Creepy AND scary. Perfect for Halloween and good for terrorizing all of us. 🙂
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Haha! Why do I enjoy that? 😉
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Delightfully dark Holly. I have on my gothic vampire garb and soon I’ll be offering candy to all the young mothers who bring their kids by the house. Now, I’ll ask them if they have their phone and extra candy to those who let me bite their necks. Hope my vampire teeth hold up.
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Laughing out loud! I wore my bee costume and giant yellow sunglasses! 🐝
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Muwaah ha haaa! Dig the glasses. I bet you were a busy bee if you had a lot of little drop by goblins to feed.
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It was very exciting for Tide ( that’s my dog)
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I bet Tide thought you were his newest best friend, Aunt Bee.
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He looked a bit baffled. 🐝🐶
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Waaa haaa haaa! Perfect Halloween mystery, “What did you do with my Human, Bee?”
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Too funny! She’s back and Bee is packed away for another day.
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What a relief. Although, I would love to read a poem written by a classy bee. How would a bee describe a trip to her favorite flower?
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She would probably go into great detail how and why she has concluded that this particular flower is her favorite and worth the hazards of the journey. 🙂
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I’m captivated already. 😊🌺🐝. I have this delicious smelling plant called Lamb’s Ear and it produces the best smelling lavender colored flowers. I have happy bees all over the place when they bloom. They are so happy, they ignore me and go straight to work. Happy bees are friendly bees.
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Indeed 🙂
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Happy Halloween to You oh Holly.
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To you too John. We had quite a few. Trick or Treaters tonight. 🎃👻
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More than creepy. Unpleasant – to imagine – but not to read. A paragraph of spellbound. Excellent, Holly.
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Unpleasant, yeah. I have to come up with something lighter. Thank you Otto.
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Spooky. Happy Halloween! 🎃
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Happy Halloween 🎃
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My heart was racing while reading this. Happy Halloween!
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Thank you a frank. Hope you had a good day.
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gut überstanden?
von mir zu dir kommen herzliche Grüße, genieße den Rest der Woche.
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Danke Lieber Klaus, have a good week
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I ignored Halloween this year, Holly, yet here you are reminding me of it. Haha! Great spooky write!
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I get iT, my friend , a grade school teacher says its the wordt day of the Year for her. Its all behind us now! Have a great day.
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You have a great day too, Holly. 😙
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😊
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Ooo!
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Thank you John.
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Brilliant! 🧡😊
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Thank you Eric🎃🧡
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Great Holly! Hope you had a nice Halloween? Michael
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It was Very nice Michael, hope you did too.
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Yes Holly, a little bit. Here sometimes is too much catholic influence. 😉
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Yes, some feel negatively about Halloween. I think it’s just fun. 🌺🎃🧡
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So true, and before any monk was here, the Celts lived very funny in this area too. 🙂
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I’m Celtic, such a weird background. Lol!
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Hey! Thats great! 😉
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Lol! I had nothing to do with it. My fathers family is from Wales. 😊
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Oh, great ancestors.😊
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🙂
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:-))
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Flash fiction at its best. 🙂
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Thank you Brian. I hope you enjoyed.
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I did. Flash fiction is very hard to write. A novel’s easy. But the shorter the story, the more each word counts… 🙂
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Thank you Brian.
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Bitte schön…
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