this is not meant for you
though you were there.
I am what I have always been,
an elixir of words.
I will not erode like the sand
or patience if it ever was.
Washed up on a restless shore
I knocked and you opened the door.
Now, like the pearls beneath my feet
I carry no burden save love.
borrowed from Pinterest
Well, Holly, your wonderfully descriptive words hold a lot of personal meaning.
It’s wonderful to be free, yet, love can be a burden like no other. ❦❦❦
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That’s so true Resa❣️Gloomy weather and poetry. Double whammy. Thank you 😊
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Thank you Ian 🌺
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Thank you John!
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You are welcome, Holly.
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Big smiles John! 😊
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Many oversized smiles to YOU oh lovely Holly!!
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This is beautiful, Holly. I love the completeness.
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Thank you so much Diana!
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I am a habitué of dreams and phantasms created by poetry and art. You combine both with such elegance, Rene. I sensed the wave of the beginning lines that delivered the last three lines and in particular the last line, which for me was the suspended moment between the wave rushing in and then rushing out and the realization of the need to breathe again. The layers of meaning play out in that span of time. No, I didn’t smoke anything, it’s just how your lovely poetry is filtered through my eccentricities. 😊
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Dan, a lovely comment, you’re amazing encouragement and inspiration are so deeply appreciated words fail me. Thank you so very much. 😊
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You are gifted my dear friend, magical even. Poetry is limitless in the scenes it can draw for a reader but, those scenes are only as good as the artist. Your heart and soul is evident in every line you draw. Every poem is transportive, like a portal to a different time and place where we see the evidence of your grace in the picture you paint with words. It’s a wonderful thing you do. Don’t stop. 😌
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Thank you so much Dan, you are really uplifting and so generous! 🙂
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It’s a mutual thing and my pleasure to inspire you. It’s my belief that when inspired, we smile genuinely and it’s s virtually impossible to have a bad day when one is smiling.
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You certainly have a wonderful way of bringing about a smile to this face, thank you Dan. Wishing you a beautiful tomorrow.
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Thank you Rene, and you as well. 😎🌞
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🙂 night Dan. Sleep well. 🌞
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Concise and moving Miss Heart.
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Thank you Mr. Cake.
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Beautiful poem.
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Thank you so much !
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I love this, for no particular reason but the feeling it evokes.
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Thank you Colleen
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I like the timeless, dreamy feel of this, Holly. Lovely!
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Thank you Merril. Such a lovely comment!
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You’re most welcome!
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Very beautiful! My favorite line – an elixir of words on my tongue. (Ahhhhh) – and the ending made me smile.
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I could ask for nothing more than a smile. Frank. Thank you for the beautiful comment!
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Lots of wisdom here. Love ought not be a burden, but too often it can be.
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It can be a burden, that’s very sad but that is life (and love), thank you so much Otto.
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The last two lines are so completing the poem. Well written, Holly! Best wishes, Michael
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Michael, I found this in spam, I have taken care of that. Thanks so much for lovely comment!
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:-))
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Thank you Jonathan ❤️
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My pleasure, my friend ❤
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So very beautiful.
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Thank you Nico.
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So beautifully expressed.
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Thank you so much Yassy. 🌼
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Beautifully, written, Holly.
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Thank you so much Robert.
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Gorgeous poem
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Thank you so much. Have s lovely day.
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And you Ms. H.
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Thank you, I shall try Mr. D. Smiles.
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As usual I admire the haunting and urgency of your work and the tone and feel, incredible ☮️
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Thank you so much Mr M.
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” I carry no burden, save LOVE “…
Love is all we need to carry, all else we can let wash away with the tide.. ❤ Beautiful… ❤
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So true! Love is not always easy, but where would we be without it? ❤
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Exactly .. Love worth having is worth the effort. 🎁💝🎁
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MAGNIFICENT!!
especially this:
“I am what I have always been,
an elixir of words.”
LOVE!!
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Thank you Eric. ❤️
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