These fragments I offer
at times coalesce but they
are defined by the spaces
between their lines.
Short and serpentine,
they gently prod your subconcious,
I want to make you comfortable,
but feel the silence.
Please do not interrupt
my breathing or break the
momentum of fragile hands
on your neck and shoulders.
My hair is a rope ladder we
climb down into a dream-mind
of iteration where words are
food and wine.
art by Sarah Riches
Awesome 👏🏻💖
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Thank you Yassy!
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Welcome, Holly 💖 have a safe and wonderful new year.
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Wishing the same for you Yassy! 💖
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❤
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💖
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Merry Christmas, Holly (when even late) 💖
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To you as well Erika! ❤
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wow! Love! ❤
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Thank you ❤️
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Your words should never be missed❤️
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Thank you so much, such a beautiful comment!
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Just like u❤️
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Ahh! Thank you ♥️
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This is so beautifully penned. Lovely!
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Thank you so much.
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My pleasure!
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A beauty, Holly! It’s like you have a velvet tongue in your brain.
I also adore the art piece you chose. Wish I could draw & paint like that.
Well, I’ve got a sense of humour. That should get me through!
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Thank you , lovely comment. A sense of humor will take you far. 😊
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😀
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Gorgeous and delightful 💖💖💖
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Thank you Jack. ❤️
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This is one of those pieces that after you read it, you are reminded of how important, and necessary, poetry is to our lives. Thank you.
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Thsnk you for such a lovely comment!
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You’re welcome.
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Your fragments are delicate yet powerful!
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Thank you 😊
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So very beautiful and evocative.
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Thank you Gigi ❤️
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Lovely. My mind slipped without effort along the lines.
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Thank you so much Will.
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I wouldn’t dream of interrupting
such graceful poetic momentum.
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That’s beautiful David, thank you!
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Have a happy & coalescing
new year, Holly most dear.
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Thank you , I will do my best. Same to you David.
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Reblogged this on John Cowgill's Literature Site.
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loved the closing the lines and the way emotions flow in this poem.
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Thank you!
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
FEAST AN ENJOY IN UNDERSTATED POETIC PASSION…!
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Thank you so much Jonathan. 😊
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Just doing my thimg! 🙂
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Very appreciated. 🌺
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YOU ARE FAIRER THAN ALL OTHER POETS—but I still hurry an(d) miss a consonant or two! Oh Dear….your poetry does affect one deeply for the sheer joy of it! ❤
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Very sweet! 😊
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AND—-SO-O-O-O-O TRUE!
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Such a beautiful write !
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Thank you so much Muscles. How’s the biking going?
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I’ve been lucky… It’s been just nice enough (above 30) to ride almost every day – but that snow and ice a couple weeks ago really threw me. Thanks for asking, and I hope you have a happy New Year ! 🙂 🙂
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I’m glad you’ve been able to ride, that’s pretty cold though. Have a happy New Year!
😊
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🙂 ! Happy New Year ! 🙂
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Thank you!
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Reblogged this on Ace Friends & Bloggers News.
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Thank you so much Ian.
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The power of words–and silence. Lovely, Holly. I hope you had a wonderful holiday!
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Thank you Merril, my Holidays were good. I’m wishing you a happy New Year!
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I so adore this poem. Line by line, it transports me along those serpentine spaces to that inner mansion were all my meaningful thoughts are stored as artful objects.
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Thank you Mr. H, I’m so glad you like and appreciate the beautiful comment!
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Always, the pleasure is mine in the enchanting House of Heart.
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Thank you dear Mr H
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Holly, I love how you spun this. The first part implores the partner not to break the silence. Don’t mess with the sensuous moment. The second says the words will follow at some point as the food and wine is enjoyed. The use of the words “dreamlike iterations” is well played. Keith
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. A beautiful interpretation Keith
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😍 Beauty.
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Thank you Johnny.
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” A man is united to his wife, and they become one flesh. ” Genesis 2;24
The coalesces make two are doing one !
Love ❤
Michel
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Thank you Michel, love ♥️
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Very romantic and beautiful
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Thank you Tosha.
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Beautiful
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Thank you so much.
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