In that state between sleep and wake
traversing birth and mortality
there is the faintest hint of earthy candles,
macabre dreams interrupted by sighs
the soft strophe of sonnets and the odd
sensation of strung pearls falling like
tiny moons through my open palm.
At the boundaries I find you
not your spirit or rose tinged snow,
but flesh and bone and sinew.
Now I am sleeping less
roused by the wing beats of boreal Owls
circling ancient Cypress,
their knife edge talons entwining knotty branches.
When sleep intrudes fitful winds erupt
feathery curtains, vibrate my hemispheres.
A swift breeze lifts me over the
valley to a moonlit hillside of sweet lea
where a silver wolf lies down beside me.
He is the scent of golden meadows and
his eyes are the color of the eastern sky.
The Rubaiyat of Holly! Love it 🙂 ❤
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Thank you Ogden…lovely! 😊❤️
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Wow! Your words are a “sensation of strung pearls falling “.
I want to sleep with a wolf. I think a wolf could like me. ❦❦
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I’m sure , and there are lots of them out there,are you certain about that? Don’t forget what big teeth they have! 😊
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I think wolves would love me, and lions and cougars and such. 😀
Yes, their teeth are lovely, and big for tearing, but they would still love me. N thinks I’m nuts when I tell him that I would make an instinctual connection with them, because I’m vegetarian. 🥑
He says that would just make me all the tastier. 🧐❦❦
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I’m sure they would sense your love of animals but they are carnivores and might be tempted to take a bite. You would need to use all of your wily charms when the moon made its appearance. On the other hand they might take you into their pride as a goddess sent as an omen of good will. I’ll go with the second scenario. I do understand N’s concerns. 😊🐾
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I’ll run with the pride/goddess thing! 🐺🐆🐅🦁🌕
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I like that. I think you should go Straight away and read Return of Dragons at Hyperion.
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Oh! I’ll look it up! I just read Alice in Wonderland. Took me 12 weeks, but by gum it was good!
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Good for you! I love Alice and the Mad Hatter, but most of all the Cheshire!
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I love that he disappears, but his grin remains!
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Lovely isn’t it?
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Oh… I started Suzanne. So far the rough up looks better than the serious one, so I’m starting again.
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Perhaps send me a pic. I can’t keep
Up with you ♥️
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Will do! Let me see if I can fix up the good one I started. I’ll send that and the rough one. (I’m doing wireframe rectangular sunglasses)
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Perfect. So Susanne!
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I know!
I just threw 4 pies in the oven. I will send something tomorrow! I need daylight to take the pics, and that will give me some time tonight to see if I can save the good sketch.
Fringed shawl tied on the hips, lots of beads and chachka and I’m thinking the skirt made from 3 fabrics… the rags she’s collected.
For some reason, I think orange should be a colour in the scheme. What do you think?
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Definitely , her oranges come all the way from China. She has me on her wavelength.
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Waves…. brilliant!
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tea and honey….
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Greenish/brown and gold.
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Sigh, yes!
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I like that plan. Shall we pack a bag and head out to the wilderness? 🦌🦅💕
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I am resisting making a comment. 😉
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Stop resisting. Anything goes here 😊
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Marvelous, HH. An intriguing verse; ‘vibrating my hemispheres’. Your little owl takes me back to “Alice in Wonderland”.
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Thank you Dee, Alice in wonderland. I like that.
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You don’t by chance live in the States, H. do you?
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Yes, I’m in the states. You? Have I given myself away? 😊
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Yes, I’m in South Florida. Are you in Georgia?
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Heavens no. How do you know I’m from Florida, what made you think that?
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Sorry, didn’t mean to spook you. I was thinking of someone of the same name.
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Not spooked. 😊
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An actress of the same name lives in the State of Georgia. Anyway, driving A1A was the tell. Living in Florida I enjoying traveling A1A, myself.
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Aha! I’m not the movie star. I’m a sometime biking ( yes, Harley) enthusiast and I like to ride AIA and the Pacific Coast Highway and the Blue Ridge. I’m a native Floridian. It’s a small world. 😊
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We were up in the Blue Ridge a few years ago, gorgegious place. I would like to get back there sometime. Yes it is a small world.
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It’s very beautiful there. We also visited the Cherokee Nation in the Smokies. Have a wonderful New Year. Do you love this great weather asuch as I?😊
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Yes, I love the change of weather.
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I wanted to get to the other side of the mountains (while we were in the Carolinas) and visit the Cherokees, but there just wasn’t enough time. We had obligated ourselves to visit a half dozen friends in North and South Carolina. Beautiful country.
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I love Asheville, I have relatives in South Carolina and Charleston, so much history there.
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Yes, we opted for Asheville, rather then Cherokee Nation. I wasn’t sorry, enjoyed Asheville.
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Intricate and mysterious. Hypnagogic imagery plus a odd fairy tale atmosphere combines to capture the dream life.
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Most have experienced that heady lull between wake and sleep where one slips into a state of de-personalization, a sense of being outside oneself, carried away to a world of illusion. Thank you so much , lovely comment Mr. Cake.
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I love that state. My pleasure Miss Heart, an uncanny piece in a way.
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Thank you Mr. Cake, I rather like the uncanny.
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So do I…and the eerie.
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Reblogged this on John Cowgill's Literature Site.
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Thank you John🌺
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🌺🌺You are welcome, Holly!!🌺🌺
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I’m wishing you a happy New Year 🎊🎈
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Same 2 U!!
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Beautiful
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Thank you Adnama.
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So beautiful, Holly, and I LOVE owls!
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Thank you Angela, I’m glad I chose the owl pic!
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You’re welcome!
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The last three lines…so beautiful. Really, just a truly beautiful image.
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Thank you Gigi !
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Thanks for the look see into my world. Great stuff you have here. I will be back.
Tim
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Thank you.
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“soft strophe of sonnets” — what a lovely turn of phrase, Holly.
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Thank you Muscles. A bit of alliteration 😊
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🙂 captivatingly conceived ! 🙂
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I do try, thank you once again 🙂
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Beautiful.
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Thank you so much.
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…great picture!
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😊 thank you.
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Merci pour ce beau poème qui nous emmène dans l’étrange !
Bonne journée Holly ! Bisous 🙂
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merci yiu pour visiter cet endroit plutôt étrange. bisous. 😊
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I just happen to be right there in that realm between sleep and awake. Early morning coffee time and reading is a fav pastime and where better than in the House of Heart. I think this is the poem I envisioned for the Wolfkeeper’s daughter. Her wolf is silver and a natural beast, an incubus without evil. The owl was also a reincarnation of a special person in my early life. This is such a beautiful poem, I won’t insult it with my limited vocabulary. Just know that it is the stuff of dreams, magic, and Eastern trances. With your permission, I’d love to open the next chapter with this enchanting poem. 🥰
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I would be incredibly honored Dan, I think thrilled is the word I’m searching for. You most certainly may use this poem to open the next chapter of your epic drama. I couldn’t be more delighted. Thank you. 🥰
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Awesome to the Max! Thank you so much, Rene ☺️. I’ve been thinking about it all morning. I had written the next chapter and scheduled it for next Wednesday but your poem turned loose a plethora of thoughts I want to introduce by way of revision to more closely match the beauty of this poem. You’ll see a link back to your website when it publishes.
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I’m very excited and so honored Dan. I really cannot wait for each chapter to take life in this mythic adventure of heroes, warriors, demons, passion , war … it is an exceptional novel and a tremendous thrill for me to be so generously included. Thank you Dan.
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I am also excited about this collaboration. I really want to make this poem a centerpiece in the story. It fits so well with the emotional spectrum of the story. As always, nothing is as it seems on Return of Dragons. There are mysteries within mysteries and the poem, for me, points to many feelings, emotions, events, and the passage of time. It will become the lifesong for Marius and the mysterious Wolfkeeper’s daughter.
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A very deeply appreciated privilege you bestow on my words, perhaps in the back of my mind Return of Dragons stays with me in that state between sleep and wake.
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beeindruckende Worte, herzliche Wintergrüße von der Müritz kommen zu dir von mir, Klaus
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Ich hoffe, Sie genießen eine warme und schöne Jahreszeit. Ich wünsche Ihnen ein schönes neues Jahr, gute Gesundheit.
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Most excellent stuff.
Sorry to be a grammur fanatic; but I think youll find its “wolf’s”.
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Is that why I can’t be your chief editor? Sighs.
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You can be my chef editor, if that helps? Not sure what that is. But it’s something.
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I hope you like Pizza.
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Holly, you may have meant that wolf to be more erotic or animalistic, but when I cannot sleep these days, the wolf represents all the issues as a parent, caretaker, person and even US citizen. I read that the mercurial, egocentric man who shall not be named is a prevalent cause of depression. I do know his untruthfulness and histrionics have worn me out. Keith
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I truly believe that this man has caused a great deal of stress and will even go so far as to say his outrageous behavior has caused serious illness in many people, Fed into hatred and mental disturbances by playing on fear and Taking advantage of the uninformed and brainwashed. Thank you Keith, I’m well aware of the serious challenge our country faces.
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Holly, well said. Keith
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This gave me chills. So exquisite. ❤
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Thank you Diana! You are a source of light and encouragement ♥️
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You are writing so very well Holly and I like that time between awake and sleep, even it can be disturbing too.
Much love to you ❤
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It’s a joy to see you back again. Thank you Irene, lovely comment 😊♥️
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Thank you Holly 🙂
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Wonderfully mystical!
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Thank you so much Orville, I hope you enjoyed!
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I truly did, very much so!
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Good, I’m very glad.
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Moving, metaphoric, beautiful and more.
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Beautiful Frank, thank you!
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Hope you stop by Saturday for the Beatles concert.
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I’ll be there ! Thanks for the invitation. 😊
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I love the way you’ve applied this poem, so perfect. Thank you Dan.
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
HE…VIBRATES (HER) HEMISPHERES…OH, WOW! COULD I TRY? I KNOW—BUT THE THOUGHT OF THIS EXPRESSION SURE EXCITES ONE! ❤
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😊 smiles!
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Beautiful words, I had to scroll past so many of your likes to say that, just beautiful.
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Thank you for the beautiful comment !
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Really enjoyed the “feathery curtains vibrate my hemisphere” line. Thanks for sharing. My poem today is about kayaking in case you have time to read?
https://peacockpoetryblog.wordpress.com/2019/03/19/exhilarating-inflating/
I am also on Instagram #coachingcreatively in case you use this medium, we could follow eachother? Sam 🙂
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Thank you Sam. I do appreciate the generous comment. I’ll be over to read your post. I’m not in Instagram or CC. I’ve been trying to get on Instagram but am advised my email is already in use so I trying to get to the bottom of that. I will be glad to follow if I can sign on there 😊
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Lovely to connect! Instagram is quite a nice way of sharing poetry too! 🙂
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I may need to open a separate mail for that.
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