There is a need for
lips pressed, the press
of hands seeking.
Here in my
straight back chair
hold back the firestorm
with elegant hands
and with your lips
claim the hollow
of my throat.
Scatter silk like
autumn leaves.
Allow me to fall
like the ripe flesh
of sweet fruit.
artist: Lu Jianjun
Reblogged this on John Cowgill's Literature Site.
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Thank you John, very appreciated!
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You are very graciously welcome. I appreciate you.
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Likewise John 🌷
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Beautiful.
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Thank you Gigi!
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Gorgeous, and I love the pairing!
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Thank you so much Angela.
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My pleasure!
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❤
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This is very romantic.
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Thank you Roberta.
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Fabulous! ❤
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Thank you Meg ♥️
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Beautiful and sensuous, Holly. I especially love the imagery of the last stanza. ❤
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Thank you so much Diana. ♥️
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Ah, you killing each time.
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Thank you so much VS.
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Always!!
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Reblogged this on Ace Friends & Bloggers News.
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Thank you Ian, very appreciated.
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As welcome Hollie …..🌹x
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🌹x
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Oh! This is so very lovely!
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Thank you Tara.
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Ah, I adore the sub rosa of Esperanza with romantic desires. The art image shows me a young woman perfect for ballet with long, slender legs and a graceful swan neck. Her fan and attire seems a sartorial symbol of her class and in this I see an allusion to the exquisite words of your poem; the hope and desire that fills an idle time in a sultry room.
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I fell in love with this painting Dan, though I gave this lady a Spanish name, I chose Liu’s beautifully lithe and exotic beauty to compliment her sub-rosa sultry desire. A beautiful comment Mr H. So fitting.
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I thought Esperanza was perfect as it means Hope in English. It just all fit so perfectly to me. Hope dreaming of her romantic interest fulfilling her desire while the image of Esperanza was elegant like a dancer, her dress and fan speak of service to a higher class. It was this imagery that made her hopes expressed in your poem so romantic, exquisite, and real.
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Dan, I intentionally named this piece the Spanish word for Hope . Thank you for wonderful Insight into this poem.
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Yes, indeedy and that really caught my attention. Masterfully done. The name, the poem, the image, they were all made for each other. Such felicity and harmony in the House of Heart 💞☯️
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You’re too kind Dan. Have a lovely evening. 💞☯️
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
SO EXPRESSIVE! JUST THE RIGHT BALANCE OF WORDS AND TIMING. NOTHING THAT ORIGINAL—EXCEPT TO HER—BUT ARRANGED IN EXCITING AND INVITING NEW WAYS! wE OLD PEOPLE ARE PERHAPS ENVIOUS OF PASSIONATE YOUTH! 🙂
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Thank you for the reblog and lovely comment Jonathan.
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Yer very welcome, my good friend!
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A wonderful composition of words and an image of romance too. Thank you Holly, and have a weekend full of sun, and free from alligators. 😉 Michael
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Thank you Michael. You too , I will definitely stay far away from any alligators. 😊🌷
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🌷🌷🌷
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Great final stanza!
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Thank you. I’m glad you think so.
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So many comments, so much love, and like ripe fruit your prose tastes of truth.
Love this, Holly!
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Thank you so much Resa. 💞
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💞
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Lovely words from the lips Rene.🌹🌹
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Thank you so much Roy 🌹🌹
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You are so very welcome.🌹🌹
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mache es dir gemütlich und entspanne dich, Klaus
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Lieber Klaus, vielen Dank für die schöne Begrüßung. Ich wünsche dir auch einen schönen Tag.
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Beautiful words!
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Thank you so much Orville!
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You moved me, Holly. Yow! NICE!! Your imagery is absolutely fantastic! 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼
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Thank you Amy, I appreciate the lovely compliment.
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You are so welcome and so deserving, Holly!
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Love this, Holly. xx
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Thank you xx
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This is beautiful dear Holly. Happy New Year to you. I wanted to come visit and say Hi and wish you the best year ahead. Much love to you and big hugs 💕💖❤️
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Dear Michelle, Happy New Year, wishing you all the best in the coming year! Sending love and many hugs! 💞
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Holly, nicely done. Very evocative. Keith
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thank you Keith.
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A haunted beauty…
And her story very well told.
tim
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Thank you Tim, lovely comment!
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Sensuality whose defense attitude is an impetuous demand, an ardent hope ; What a talent to describe the fire of love , Holly!
Love ❤
Michel
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Thank you Michel, a lovely compliment. Love, Holly ♥️
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One should never underestimate the importance of hands. 😉
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Absolutely not. 🙂 thank you Brian.
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Loved the way your words captured the yearning of the soul and the needs of the body!! Your lines – “and with your lips
claim the hollow
of my throat.
Such a lure for imaginings??
Bellissimo, Dear R, Bellisimo
xoxoxo
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Belllisimo dear Chuck . xoxoxo
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thank you so much Chuck. xo
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