When you leave I become
the sea gull begging salt from
from the briny air.
My veins are a winding tunnel
Of deep purple sea.
I channel you in the night owl’s
perpetual call that awakens the
Subconscious to the feel of
your phantom hand at the angle of my
hips.
At dawn your shirt hangs from a
Closet door in the buttery sunlight
and I become so small I could slip
inside the lining of your chest
sheltered by your warm skin where I
long to be.
art by Anuraag
Beautiful
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Thank you so much Maverick.
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Love the sea gull begging salt from from the briny air. Great stuff!
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Thank you, I’m glad you do, I truly appreciate the kind words.
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So beautiful. I love the “phantom of your hand” and the “buttery sunlight.” Wonderful poetry, Holly.
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Thank you Diane, such a lovely comment!
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Oh, this is just lovely, Holly. 💜
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Thank you Angela ♥️
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You’re welcome! 💜
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Wow, how lovely.
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Thank you Roberta!
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Thank you so much Roberta.
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Quietly sensual!
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Thanks very much Orville. Have a great day
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Beautifully penned.
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Thank you dear Yassy 🌹
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🤗🌺
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💞🤗
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‘the phantom of your hand’ – wonderful
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Thank you Beth, very appreciated.
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Gorgeous, Ms. H.
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Thank you Mr.D.
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Reblogged this on Ace Friends & Bloggers News.
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Thank you so much Ian
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Welcome so much Hollie 🌹
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🌹
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Wonderful Holly! 🙂
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Thank you Paul 😊
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my pleasure Holly! 🙂
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😊
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Reblogged this on John Cowgill's Literature Site.
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Thank you John! So appreciated!
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You are welcome Holly! i appreciate you.
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And I you! 🌹
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You captured the sensual sincerity of love. Well done, Holly.
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Thank you so much Frank . Have a lovely day 😊
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oh, wie schön liest sich das, ich hoffe, dein Start in die Woche war ok?
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Vielen Dank, Klaus. Die Woche läuft gut. Ich hoffe, du bist gut!
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Very beautiful!!!
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Thank you Marieke!
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Lovely imagery, Holly.
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Thank you so much Merril
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You’re very welcome!
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What a wonderfully passionate poem! I wish I wrote with more “pizz-azz” like you!
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Thank you SW, such a lovely comment. You’re a very fine writer!
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Sensual! 😉
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Thank you Gyslaine, I hope you enjoyed reading this. 😊
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Yes of course 😉
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You said that perfectly and I wore my husbands shirts for a long time after he died.
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We become attached to articles. All things that bring them back to us if only in memory. Big hugs to you!
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Wonderful!
Now I want to be a sea gull, a purple sea and a snow owl’s call.
Your words speak to me. ❦❦❦
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Thank you Resa, those are such solitary things, perhaps an echelon of swallows retuning to Capistrano? 😊💞💞💞
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OOOH! Okay, I’d like that! Can we take the sea gull and owl with us? 😊💞💞💞
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For sure, no one gets left behind!🦅🦅🦅🦅
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❦ 🤗❦
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::sigh::
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Thank you Melanie.
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It’s a hard life when you miss someone that much.
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IT is. Thank you Dan.
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Reblogged this on From 1 Blogger 2 Another.
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Thank you for the reblog!
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Lovely – I particularly like the last stanza.
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Thank you for the lovely comment JT.
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I’ve re=read this a few times now each time it strikes pure beauty.
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Thank you, such a lovely comment ‘
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A love that stays within the heart. You are a masterpiece Rene🌹🌹
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That’s really lovely, thank you Roy 🙂
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My pleasure, a beautifully written piece.
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Thank you!
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Very welcome🌹🌹
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🌹🌹
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That really flows from the page Holly. Beautiful!
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Such a lovely compliment, thank you Gavin.
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A beautiful play with words and analogues.
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A lovely compliment, thank you Otto.
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Oh to become so small to slip into the lining of his chest.. 🙂 exquisite!
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Thank you Sue…lovely 😊🌹
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❤
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
SAD—SO SAD—MUST I ❤ 😀
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Thank you Jon.
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Gotta keep you happy! with true things. ❤
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♥️
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😀 ❤ ❤ ❤
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SO…WHO WAS THAT LUCKY guy you were kissin’? I she “tghe one”, or …? I was a fool for not rejoicing in memory of those days!
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That’s my husband.
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That was a one time valentine ‘s day thing.
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SHOCK!) Lucky…now, I can’t call him or you a dog—now can I? I’m not really broken hearted—much. How many years…and when is your anniversary?
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Why would you call us a dog? Too funny.
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I know…one of the foolish parts of my generation. As you know, it usually referred to the guy getting a hot chick like yourself. Just saying….!
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Smiles, you are sweet Jon. I’m just like anyone else. Nothing special.
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I think hubby and family—and I—would beg to differ. Is that not so?
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🙂
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Good.
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