Without end or beginning,
I wait for you.
Near night I hunger for darkness.
Shadows of lilting swans
we plunge from cliffs of vertigo
into the gold dust of desire.
You are the hoarfrost of winter,
brilliant bursts of Autumn’s fire,
solitary eagle above the mountains.
Beneath your wings streams
of infinity carry you to my shore.
Should you fly on to distant provinces
I will follow,
become indigenous to that land.
Birds of South Asia
this is simply beautiful and amazing lines..wow
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Thank you so much Mihran.
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wonderful…
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Thsnk you do much!
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Just wow!
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Thank you ,I’m glad you liked!
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Love your site!!!!! 🙂
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Thank you! 😊
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You wrote this with a wonderful character in mind.
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THANK you Frank.
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I loved the way you structured the lines here. The language is beautiful.
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Thank you so much Rob.
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Simply gorgeous, Holly.
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Thank you Dale
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That ending is absolutely wonderful. I love it.
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Thank you Gigi!
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It’s truly a wonderful poem on nature… You brought me into your world, House of Heart! It’s really a pleasure knowing your world of poetry.
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Thank you , that’s really lovely and so appreciated!
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You are very much welcomed.
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I love your way of writing poems. It’s like you weave poems in a way wherein every single imagery adds to the vividness of the imagination.
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Thank you Watt, lovely and generous comment.
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Beautiful imagery, Holly. I love your use of birds in your poems. ❤
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Thank you Diane ♥️
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So vivid. Beautiful 👌💟
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Thank you!
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Lovely imagery
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Thank you Derrick, lovely comment
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Merci pour ce joli blog, à bientôt ! Coin-coin ! 🙂
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Thank you! Have a lovely day.
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schönen Sonntag und viel Erfolg in der kommenden Woche wünsche ich dir, Klaus
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Schönen Sontag Lieber Klaus. Woche wünsche ich dir . 🌷
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so soll es sein
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Ja, Dankeschön Lieber Klaus. Lg
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Holly, you swooped me away. Wow!! 💜💜💜
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Thank you Amy, I thought the amazing bird would catch your eye ! 💜💜
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It did! It did, Holly! 😘
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I thought so 😘
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Lovely, Holly. It seems like it goes with the previous one of dreams–here the person becomes a bird in her dreams. (Or perhaps it’s a myth.)
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Thank you Merril , a dream a myth or a poem of longing. This is not a new poem but one I’ve revisited as I am wont to do. Most of my poetry is pure fiction.
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I didn’t think it was true–just that it seemed related to the previous one. 🙂
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😊
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You lifted me up within its beautiful worded wings Holly.. ❤ Thank you ❤
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Thank you Sue ♥️
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You are most welcome Holly I enjoyed my visit today ❤
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Your visits are always beyond welcome!
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Aww, thank you so much Holly, that means a lot. ❤
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♥️🌺
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Beautiful! I admire how you create images!
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Thank you, that is mutual.
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That’s great to hear!
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I sincerely mean it.
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😘
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🤗
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NEW LAND … NEW Bird … reminds me …
little Birds are *breeding* here again … at our HOME … since Generations …
always welcome …
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Birds are amazing and beautiful creatures. Thank you.
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… think so 2 …
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Indeed! Thank you again.
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– … love your words …
they should be “escort” by a Fender Stratocaster … 😉
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I wouldn’t mind that 🙂
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don´t give me a try … before David Gilmour is out … 😉
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Reblogged this on John Cowgill's Literature Site.
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Thank you so much John!
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You are welcome so much Holly.
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How romantic! Your poem and you are indigenous to beauty near, and afar.
❦❦❦
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Ah! So sweet! Thank you Resa.
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This is beautiful I wish we could be birds and fly 💜🙋🏼♀️❤️
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Beautifully written.
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Another mesmerizing poem of longing and devotion. The one that goes with is the one to hold on to. That is a rare and beautiful bird indeed.
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Thank you Dan, I wrote this poem some time ago. Thank you for the lovely comment.
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This one also resonated deep within. It is such a gift you have to find the dream of others and show it to them.
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Thank you Dan. You really make me feel very good. I appreciate that.
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I’m sure you give much more than you receive, Rene. It is a delight to wander around the WP neighborhood and drop in on friends to share the creative energy that fuels our internal lives. At House of Heart there is always the best food for the soul. 🤗
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Your visits a a day brightener. How is the next scene coming along. Nudge.
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I am happy to leave a little sunshine with you. That next chapter got interupted by close friends visiting from Colorado. The only thing left to do is post it if it can sneak by my obsessive editing. I’m excited about it because we are finally moving into the main challenge to our romantc Revenants.
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That’s exciting. Nothing can interfere with the romantic revenants. 😊
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Yes indeedy! True romantic Revenants cannot be dissuaded from their visions of splendiferous adventure. 🧛🏻♂️🧛🏻♀️🐺💗
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🌹 certainly not! 🧛🏻♀️🐺
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Beautiful writing!
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Thank you!
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Beautiful Rene, like birds that soar through the open sky’s that is how your poem flowed. Love how you hypnotize your words with such gorgeous ability to do the same to us.🌹
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Beautiful comment Roy, thank you 🌹
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A beautiful post Rene.🌹
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Thank you Roy 🌹
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🌹🌹❤️
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Reblogged this on johncoyote and commented:
Wonderful words shared by a talented writer.
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Thank you, so appreciated John.
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Words and photo my friend. Amazing.
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Thank you so much John!
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Amazing with a wonderful choosen image too. Thank you for sharing, Holly! Best wishes, Michael
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My best Michael, thank you.
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🙂🙂
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You have been prolific and on an outstanding tear.
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Thank you for the generous and inspiring words Mr. Cake, I must say the same for you.
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Nowt but the truth Miss Heart.
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Thank you, same here.
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Ah let me flatter you for once Miss Heart.
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Thank you much Mr. C, is it my pleasure to be flattered by such a fine writer as yourself.
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This is turning into a competition. Nonsense Miss Heart, I am just a well read chancer, you are the real McCoy.
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Oh wow, a debate. I thank you so much for the beautiful compliment but I have read your work and it is amazing.
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Hmmm I will be a gentleman and retire from the field. Victory is yours Miss Heart. Thank you for the flattery, which I do rather enjoy though i shouldn’t.
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You are a gentleman Mr. Cake, always, thank you.
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I can be a bit sweary but I do believe in manners.
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Smiles, do you swear Mr. Cake?
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Yes though I try to use it sparingly in writing so that it has maximum impact…sometimes you need the force of swear words to express fully the idea you are trying to convey. Especially in writing erotica.
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I enjoy writing and reading erotica. There is a fine line that only the gifted know how to maneuver. It’s a touchy subject Mr. Cake.
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Agreed…it can so easily descend into the kitsch or the risible, but you don’t need to fear Miss Heart.
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Sadly, as is often the case erotica is less acceptable if written by women. Your writing in all genres is impeccable.
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It is a very male dominated genre as the vast majority of consumers until recently were male. I take your point, however another factor is the ambivalence that feminism feels about the genre. The Story of O appears more shocking as it was written by a women who confesses to female perversion which is unacceptable to both conservatives and feminists. Murky waters indeed.
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I would like to see women feel comfortable writing what they want to. When we fear what others think as a writer we are lost. I really enjoyed The Story of O, conservatives would have us burning books. 😊
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I would never let that happen Miss Heart.
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I knew I could count on you Mr.Cake.
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Always Miss Heart
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Thank you Mr. Cake.
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thank you Chuck!
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Always a pleasure reading and sharing your words, My Dear! Hope you have a great weekend!!
xoxoxo
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xoxoxo
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Hey Holly, I am loving the use of the birds in your beautiful work with words 🙂 🐥🐤
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Thank you John, I do use those little creatures a lot!
Maybe I’m influenced by your Amazing photos!
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