The sun is still low in the sky,
it’s rays have barely begun
to pierce the chill of our pale window.
Don’t go, we are scarcely out of dreaming.
Caress my breast with the lifeline of your palm
while my head rests in the crook of your shoulder.
With these fingertips you kiss one by one
I will ease the furrow of your brow and
soothe your body with the twining of my own.
Let the hours pass through us tenderly
like a shallow river of fledgling reeds.
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Lovely post.Thanks a lot for sharing.
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Thank you, I hope you enjoyed reading.
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Beaucoup de sensualité dans ce poème ! J’adore ! Bon dimanche Holly ! Gros bisous 🙂
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Thank you Gyslaine, Gros Bisous!
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A very tender poem. Good job.
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Thank you Bojana.
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So sensuously delicious.
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Thank you Dale.
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Good Sunday. Soul
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Thank you, to you as well.
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A delicious poem, Holly. Love the beauty and sensuality of your imagery.
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Thank you so much Marta.
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You are welcome and it is Marta. 😉
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My apologies Marta! ❤
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A beautiful and intimate moment.
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Thank you Syl. I hope you are having a wonderful day!
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You’re very welcome and I am working on it! Hope you are too!
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Most definitely! Thank you Syl.
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That’s awesome! You’re very welcome!
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🙂
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“…we are scarcely out of dreaming” what a gorgeous poem.
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Thank you Gigi!
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Belle sensazioni!!!
sherabbraccicari
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Sono contento che ti piaccia questo Shera!
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🌹
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Beautiful…
“Let the hours pass through us tenderly
like a shallow river of fledgling reeds.”
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Thank you Maverick, lovely comment.
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thank you so much Ian.
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Words are art. ‘…our pale window…’ proves that. A lovely romantic poem, young Ms Holly.
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Thank you Mike , a lovely comment!
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Lovely poem.
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Thanks again Mike, have a great day!
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A beautiful description of wakening in the morn. I hope that is what you are able to enjoy 🙂
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Thank you for the lovely comment 🙂
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This gave me the chills – the good kind. So beautiful.
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Thank you so much Diana.
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Holly, I have not seen, but do like the sensuous phrasing of “sooth your body with the twining of my own.” Very evocatively said. Nicely done. Keith
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Thank you Keith. Lovely comment.
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Tender love is all I can say when reading something so peacefully romantic Rene🌹. A beautiful description of a lovers hand caressing while the sun follows the same path down the body, such passion.❤️
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Thank you Roy 🌹🌹
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Very welcome 🌹
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Reblogged this on John Cowgill's Literature Site.
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thank you John🌼
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🌼🌼YOU are welcome, Holly!!!🌼🌼
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It’s a gorgeous image, and sensuous place! thank you, Holly! ❦❦❦
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Thank you Resa ❦❦❦
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❦❦❦
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So dreamy … a sigh of delight! 💖
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Thank you Meg ♥️
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A finer version of early morning light. 🌹🙏
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Thank you so much Rob. 🌹🌹
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Ok 👍
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Your link didn’t go through.
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Beautiful – fits the picture perfectly
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Thank you Derrick , lovely comment
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Mea culpa Derrick. I apologize! 🌹
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I’ve corrected that!
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Easily done – I have done so 🙂
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Thank you Derrick, you are kind! 💐
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Nice art.. with nice words..
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Thank you .
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Heeeeey, this a comment to the other post you closed the comments! Clalssic……
Enjoy the day, looove ya
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OH, I closed the comments too soon! Thank you Charly, this is a classic by Nina! Loove ya!
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Another comment on the Nina Simone post. Perfect. She was a great artist. The background beat on that Seeline woman song was very similar to what I heard in west african music a long time ago.
And another thought: on the video your friend posted, was that the Klan marching in Washington, D.C.? OMG. Don’t want to know when that was, I just hope it never happens again.
Be good Coeur de feu.
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I haven’t watched the video. I will have to.
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Do. Apart from a great song. That’s Nina Simone right? The images are very strong.
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Thank you Brian.
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Pleasure Coeur de Feu.
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Perfection Rene. These vignettes into a soft and sweet romance is immortal. Just to dream such perfection in love is enough to last. Some dreams are memories from this life or another. It makes the moment of rising from sleep a beautiful start of the day.
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Thank you Dan.
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I adore how you can bring out the very best of every emotion we have the capacity to feel and always with a ray of sunshine, no matter what.
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I’m so glad this poem has that affect and that you like it.
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My days are happy when I can read at the House of Heart. 🌹
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Thank you Dan. Have a wonderful day.
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Let’s do it! 😎🌞😎
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The flavor of your poetry taste delicious and so beautifully well expressed in its sensual ways.
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Thank you Charlie, that is such a beautiful compliment. 🌺
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You’re very welcome, Holly. 🙂
Thank you also for the flower icon. 🙂
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You’re welcome. Have a great day Charly.
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🙂
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A beautiful love , early in the morning , is a true poetry, Holly.
Love ❤
Michel
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Thank you Michel,Love ♥️
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A gift when we are able to ease the furrow of a brow… Love does that.. ❤ excellent.. ❤
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Thank you Sue ♥️
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Let the hours pass through us tenderly
If it does let not the Sun rise at all.
Nice
Shiva
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Thank you Shiva, lovely comment !
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Brimming with sensuality !
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Thank you Muscles!
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This is really sensual. You have the softest but most pressing of touches.
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Thank you Mr. Cake, I’m glad you think so.
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I do Miss Heart.
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You are kind and encouraging.
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Beautifully sensuous!
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Thank you Betty
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Hi there. Lovely writings! Thank you for connecting 😊
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Thank you ! Lovely blog you have.
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You are welcome and thank you! It’s been good therapy.
I’m reading your poetry and seeing wonderful images. Just delightful!
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Such a lovely comment, so appreciated!
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My sincere pleasure. Nice to meet you 🙂
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Same here 🌷
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🙏🏻
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Holly, as tender and beautiful as moonlight’s hand caressing the sea.
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Such a beautiful comment, thank you so much Lance.
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A very sincere pleasure, Holly.
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Thank you kindly Lance.
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Holly, you’re very welcome.
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