Sometimes I see myself through
your eyes, my pale face so in love,
aching for the caress of that
flaxen haired boy racing
through rolling wheat fields.
Suddenly serious your adventurous
eyes sent shivers through me.
I longed for your touch anytime and
we kissed open mouthed without
permission.
I adored your mock anger when
chasing after me and the awkward
way you looked down at your hands.
Soon Autumn threw its shadow on
sprouting wheat, smooth and wet.
From the half closed door I hear the
whisper of your breathing and know
there are different kinds of love,
wild , ruthless, and unafraid.
art by Rob Hefferan
Beautiful, Holly. Quiet and expressive in a delicious way. 😊
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Thank so much Watt. Lovely comment 😊
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Great ending!
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Thank you so much.
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love this ~ raw but emotionally in control
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Thank you John, so glad you liked it.
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I am overwhelmed by the sincerity of this poem. I’m in awe of the mastery of your words.
You create universes unto themselves. Crab apple preserves appear upon my shelves.
❦
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I never dreamed I could conjure a crab apple preserve universe on your shelves. I’ve achieved a whole new level of conjuring. Enjoy the Crab Apples , I grew them myself. ❦❦❦❦
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Reblogged this on Hamed M. Dehongi.
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Thank you kindly!
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Thank you
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This is a wonderful poem, Holly
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Thank you Roberta .
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Merveilleux ma chère ! Bravo ! Bisous 🙂
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Merci Gyslaine. Bisous.
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A wonderful sharing. :))
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Thank you, I’m glad you enjoyed this.
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MAGIC, FROM THE HEART, CHINA
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Thank you so much.
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Reblogged this on John Cowgill's Literature Site.
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Thank you John. Very appreciated!
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You are welcome Holly. I appreciate you.
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I appreciate you as well John. Thank you!
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You are very graciously welcome.
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Beautifully romantic as it takes me back to haymaking time 🙂 when the fields swayed in the breeze .. And the heart beat that little bit faster holding the hand of one you love. 🙂
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A lovely sight fields of wheat rolling with the breeze. A frolicking place! 😊
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lass es dir heute richtig gut gehen, Klaus
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Danke, du machst denselben Klaus. Alles Gute!
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Powerful emotions
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Thank you Derrick
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Thank you so much Ian.
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Welcome as always ….great and ❤️ felt …..on 🔥 Hollie 🌹
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Thank you Ian 🌹
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😊
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The power of love–and memories. Yes, many types of love.
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Thank you Merril 🌺
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🙂
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Sentimental, romantic and a hint of provocation. I love it 🙂
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Thank you David. Smiles
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There are different kinds of Love that was more interesting Holly.
Have a Good Day Friend
Shiva
🌷🎶
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You must tell dear Shiva! 🌷
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Wonderful! I run out of ways to express my admiration for your work, Holly! 💖
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Ah, thank you Meg, that’s a wonderful compliment! I admire your’s so much, this really means a lot to me 💖
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You’re more than welcome Holly. I thoroughly enjoy your poetry too!
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Thank you once again Meg!
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Simply beautiful!👏❤️
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Thank you so much. ❤️
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Wow…passion, excitement and beauty all rolled into one gorgeous poem.
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Thank you Gigi.
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So beautiful, Holly!
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Thank you Angela!
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My pleasure.
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Thank you again!
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Ooooh! What a wonderful capture of romantic, young love! So beautifully penned, Holly! Bellissimo!!!!
xoxoxo
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Thank you Chuck xoxo
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My pleasure! Always look forward to your postings!!
xoxoxo
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Super hero poetry!!!
(close to finishing)
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I will be over to see PBH! 🌺♥️
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It’s up!!!!!
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Terrific!
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I linked to your blog in the opening line with the words “Princess Blue Holly”
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You’re so amazing! I can’t wait to see PBH. ♥️
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I can hardly wait for you to see her!
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I’ll be over shortly! 🥰
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xoxo (I’m trying to make dinner! LOL!
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😊
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I sense the romanticism of provoke and love. 🙂
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Thank you Charlie, lovely comment, so appreciated! 😊
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You welcome, Holly.
I wish I can write romantic stuff like this. It’s difficult for me to do so. As my head is on a whole other level. I’ll try writing a love romantic poem someday.
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Well, I love your poetry, give romantic a shot someday. You might surprise yourself. 🌷
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🙂 Bless your heart.
I’ll try and see what comes out. 🙂
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Bless yours! 😊
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet and commented:
Don’t Miss this great love poem!!!
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Thank you so much Chuck.
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Always happy to share you words, Dear Holly!!
xoxoxo
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xoxoxo
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Sweet and lovely !
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Thank you, lovely comment!
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Rene, this poem took me back to my youth — a carefree time. With your permission, I would like to reblog it on my site. Thank you for the journey.
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Thank you Dennis , always feel free to reblog anything you want, you never need to ask.
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The third side of Superhero PHB. 🙂
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Thank you Frank . It’s not easy being a super hero. 🦸♂️
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That role isn’t for everyone, but you fit the role.
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
REAL LOVE ENCOMPASSES MANY THINGS…
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Lovely comment Jon, thank you for the reblog.
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Looks like I missed reblogging earlier!
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So good! Amazing poetry, Holly.
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Thank you Diana
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Reblogged this on Dennis Cardiff and commented:
A beautiful poem about the magic of childhood, ‘wild, ruthless, and unafraid.’
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Thank you Dennis 🌺
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Just beautiful! Something’s waking Up inside of me. Nostalgia? I think so. This poem creates realistic yet diffuse picutres in my mind.. thank you 🌈
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That’s really lovely, thank you. 🌈
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Very lovely description of love. Think its a climax in real love. Michael
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Thank you Michael.
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Wildly romantic…you are always unafraid.
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Thank you, lovely and inspiring words. I ws trying to express the various stages of love. More on this subject can be found in Theresa Crenshaw’s book The Alchemy of Love and Lust.
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Now that is a title to pique my interest.
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It’s quite interesting.
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… would LIKE 2 be … your TARGET …
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Amazing writing. I love it.
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Thank you very much!
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Wild, ruthless, and unafraid. I used to think that was all there was and it was enough. Another timeless poem beautifully rendered and oh, so relatable.
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Thank you Dan, I’ve missed you
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Very glad, I circled back and found all the wonderful things you’ve shared. Food for the soul.
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I’m glad you did!
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Me Too! 🤗
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🤗
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Wild, ruthless and unafraid?
See previous comments about Passion.
🙂
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What comments?
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I think we may have “talked” about Passion. (Or didn’t we?)
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I guess that slipped my mind. 🙂 You’re a gem Brian.
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No. You’re the gem. I’m just a piece of polished glass. 😉
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😊were both gems 😊
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Haha! A vision just crossed my mind. We were ear-rings dangling on somebody’s ears… Hmmm. Maybe there is a story there. Cheers.
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Now I will have some kind of weird dream, lol! Cheers!
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🙂
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Lovely poetry
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Thank you.
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