It is too soon
to prune but wilted petals
wave provocatively from a
bowing trellis
among the bent stems the sun is pleasing to bare shoulders.
Pulpy worms are sweet to scavenging tongues of hungry birds
plucked without warning from spidery veins of leaves
Elongated roots relentlessly war with nicked and bleeding fingers
I know it it is too early but chaotic gardens long for control
once again.
Niiiiiiice!!!!
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Thank you !
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You have a way with words. ๐
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Thank you Frank ๐
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Lady Ivy feels she knows whatโs best for the garden of life, itโs in her โveinโ. You are simply mesmerizing Rene.๐น
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Thank you Roy, thatโs really lovely ๐น
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Very welcome Rene๐น
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Sounds very much like my days dearest Holly ๐ The birds are having an extra treat today as the heavens open and the worms swim.. ๐
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It’s been a very rainy summer here too Sue, I’m glad your garden grows and the worms swim to their hearts content. Thank you dear Sue! ๐
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๐๐๐ Couldn’t find a worm, but we have plenty of caterpillars too ๐
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We too! And humongous Cicadas. And lizards ๐ฆ. Ah, the sub tropics. โบ๏ธ
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What you capture from art is beautiful.
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Such a beautiful comment as always Sylvester. Thank you so much!
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You’re welcome, Holly! I have always appreciated your writing.
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And I yours my friend! ๐
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This is beautiful in many ways.
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Thank you so much Dale , such a lovely comment โ
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Reblogged this on lampmagician and commented:
Wild nature needs control… #Poetry โค โค
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Thank you so much โฅ๏ธโค๏ธ
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Much welcome and appreciated โคโค๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐๐ค
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I really enjoyed this, great work.
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Thank you River, very appreciated!
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Youโre welcome.
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Reblogged this on Spiritual Challenges.
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Thank dear Stefan.
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Thank you dear Stefan.
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I love Narcissus flowers. They are like the lilies after the buds die. Beautiful poem and art Holly โค ๐ Hope your week is going well.
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Thank you Michelle, All is well here, I hope you are having a wonderful week . โค๏ธ
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I am it’s already tiring and been full โค Hugs to you xxx
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Whoa! This is mind-blowing!!
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Thank you Watt, Iโm glad you like this , I appreciate your great comment.
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Wonderful way with words. ๐
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Thank you , lovely compliment ๐
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I always seem to say the same thing, but your writing is sublime, Holly! Cher xo
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Your encouragement is always appreciated so very much Cher, thank you! xo
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๐ xoxo
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๐ค๐ Smiles!
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Beautiful, Holly. My garden longs for a bit of control too, but the love the fecund wildness of it. I hope summer treats you well. โค
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The wildness is beautiful, I prefer my garden feral ๐ . Summer is blistering hot here with occassional storms to cool us down. I hope you are well and to find you back at Mirror very soon. โค
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Your description of the nature of a garden is perfect. Beautiful poem. โค
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thank you Gigi โค
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โค You always give me sweet dreams.
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I could ask nothing better! โค๏ธ
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โค Seriously, you cover your readers in the sound of oceans, and the petals of flowers, the touch of a lover and the beauty of nature. That's what you do.
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Aw, thatโs so beautiful! Thank you Gigi, that really makes me feel great. โค๏ธ๐ท
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You are so subtle.
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There is a bit of subliminal, nothing gets by you. ๐
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It probably does but I try.
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You donโt seem to need to try too hard. Thank you Mr. Cake.
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Loved it!
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Thank you ๐
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Your words always cast a sunshine on us readers. Beautifully well painted. ๐
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thank you Charlie, your words mean a lot to me! ๐
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You are welcome. Bless your my friend. ๐
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You too Charlie, many blessings. ๐
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I enjoy this poem . I see you in rest on the lawn under the sun near the plants so that you have a close view on them .
About the hungry birds , they are also probably thirsty . I keep for them in my backyard a bassin filled with water !
Love โค
Michel
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Thank you Michel , I havenโt spent much time in the garden , itโs so hot. I have a bird bath too . Love, โฅ๏ธ
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It is why, Holly, you see bent stems in a bowing garden under the burning sun.
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So true Michel. It’s too darn hot! ๐ โค
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Damn you are so perfect.
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Thank you, I wish! Such a beautiful compliment! ๐น
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Thank you Christopher.
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Ya welcome!โ
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Reblogged this on John Cowgill's Literature Site.
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Thank you John. ๐น
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๐น ๐น ๐นYou are welcome, Holly!!! ๐น ๐น ๐น
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You read my mind! How did you do that Rene? LoL, my chaotic garden sounds exactly like your poem except it doesnโt bow to my will.
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They rarely do, thank
You so much Dan.
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Ha ha ha, well my garden must be normal then. Thank you for the sunshine Rene.
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Thank you for the lovely comment. My garden grows feral now, so much rain. Iโm sure it loves the morning sun and afternoon showers! Have a lovely evening Dan.
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I see feral gardens everywhere. ๐ณ. We didnโt have spring so my spring flowers are popping out as summer flowers. We are all confused. My evening is indeed lovely and all the best to you too as well Rene. Hereโs hoping Monday feels more like Wednesday ๐
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Thank you for the lovely comment Dan. I found this in spam….
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All my comments belong in spam. I do get a chuckle at the spam filterโs lack of consistency in protecting you from me ๐โจ
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Oh, look, I’ve saved you. It usually only takes one to break the spam cycle. You don’t belong in there! ๐
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I do thank you for pulling me out of the spam can. Usually the other folks in there are a little sketchy but lately, a lot of us are getting pitched in there. I found six readers languishing in spam the other day. Itโs Hans for sure. That ASS! ๐
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So funny! Last year I went through a long phase of having my comments spammed. I think if just one person designates you as Spam ( by mistake if course) you are Spam.
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Gosh, that sounds a lot like what is happening right now. I think WP has invented a new class of blogger. The wrongly spammed.
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They have their little games. Itโs a boring job!
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Ha ha ha! Oh, I can see those snotty WP IT police (pronounced whip it) quaffing quart cups of Starbucks Frappachinos and powdered sugar donuts while tweaking the spam filter with one finger on the keyboard then high fiving themselves after another thousand blogoteers disappear in the spam dungeon. ๐๐ฒ
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they are having a big ole time! I want that job. You are hysterical. ๐
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That would be fun. Feeeel the P O W E R! Another unsuspecting blogger circling the WP bowl. ๐ฝ๐ฑ
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So funny. Yes , I want the POWER!
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Me too! Letโs do it ๐
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Take over WP? Asskimet? the world?
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Oh yes! Take over the world. Iโve already started with several of my Blogoteer friends. You should join us. We have a brigade each of chickmunks, squirrels, cats and ninja otters. Antarctica gave up without a fight, thank goodness. We should take over WP so we can get our message out to the world. Would you like to be Bodica the II?
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Who is Bodica the ll. She’s not a porn star is she? I kind of like chickmunks.
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Waaaa haaaa haaaaa! Rene, you made me snort laugh ๐. Boudica was a queen of the British Celtic Iceni tribe who led an uprising against the Roman Empire in AD 60 or 61. She led from the front line too. She is considered a British folk hero. She was also a red haired beauty. I donโt think she did any porn but she sure kicked a lot of Roman bootie. Kymber from Boomcha blog is our Deputy Commander and her cat Cesare is the Army Grand Martial of Troops. He leads all of Kymberโs daughterโs chickmunks. They are fiesty little rascals that wear half acorn shells for helmets.
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
JUXTAPOSITION BETWEEN IDEAL ART AND THE REALITY OF BLOODY FINGERS PULLING UP STUBBORN WEED ROOTS! ๐
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Thank you ๐
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LOVE YA, KID! โค
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Thanks! ๐ค
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I like ” chaotic gardens” has a certain charm in that phrase!
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Thank you so much Neha!
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So beautiful! Xx
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Chaotic gardens? Hmmm. ‘Like that.
Cheers Coeur de Feu.
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Thank you Brian!
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