The waves sweep in
dropping treasures at the shore
retrieving it with outgoing swells.
Shimmering Seagulls, angled ragged
shapes, swooped up by the winds cadence.
Shells and speckled seaweed coexist
with abalone in every shade of color the
eye can hold.
Macaw and ruby parrots fill the trees
and bird of paradise too beautiful to bear.
Within a moments distraction they vanish
beyond the pebbled shore and falcon sky.
Beautiful. Wish I was there.
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Thank you so much Dana.
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Very beautiful.
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Thank you Nico!
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What a beautiful existence.
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Thank you Chatter… x
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You’re welcome. β€
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You write with a vivid vivacity π
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Thank you Yassy π
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My pleasure, dear Holly
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It’s all mine, Yassy. π
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Beautiful images stimulating my imagination in “The Penitent Sky”.
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Thank you for the lovely comment Timothy.
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Refreshing imagery. π
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Thank you Frank
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Your imagery is superb. I was there…
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Thatβs really beautiful Dale, thank you!
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Your words brought me there.
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I could ask for nothing better! π΄π΄π΄
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Wonderful, I can feel the gentle sea breeze.
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Thank you Roberta!
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Very beautiful Holly π
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Dear Irene, it’s so great to see you again. Thank you so much! π
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You deserve it Holly π
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I’ve missed you Irene, glad to see you again!
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I have missed you too Holly.
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Voller Sprachgewalt … beeindruckend π
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Ich danke dir sehr! freundliche GrΓΌΓe. π
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π΅πΆπ΅πΆπ΅π¦ back to you! π
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DankeschΓΆn *freu*
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Lovely poem. The sibilant alliteration mimics the sound of waves on the sea shore
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Thank you Derrick, lovely comment.
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Colors , shapes , seagull flights , You lead us on the beach at low tide , Holly . What a charm !
Love β€
Michel
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Thank you Michel, love! β€
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Ah, Holly, your words paint such a beautiful image…
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Thank you Marina .
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Lovely, Holly. I could watch the waves for hours. π
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Thank you Merril, I hope you enjoyed! π
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Once again…you have me on the beach.
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Itβs hard to stay away! Thank you Gi!
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β€ Your writing is so strong it takes me places.
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Thank you Gigi! β₯οΈ
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Beautirful and serene. One can almost here the surf.
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Thank you, lovely comment.
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So beautiful makes me want to go there too Holly πβ€οΈ
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Thank you Michelle, β₯οΈβ₯οΈ
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Lush, jeweled and hallucinatory.
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Thatβs beautiful! Thank you.
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The poem is beautiful Miss Heart.
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Thank you so much Mr. Cake
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Reading your poem is like a mini vacation in a paradise π
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Thank you so much John
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thank you Chuck! xo
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Always love to read and share your words, My Dear!! Hope you are going to have a fun weekend – better than the last one? Ha!
xoxo
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Thank
You Chuck. I really appreciate that. Looks like rain again this weekend, maybe a good movie. Enjoy your weekend xoxo
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You are so welcome! Sorry about the rain. It’s summer here, isn’t it there! LOL! We just saw Yesterday and liked it. I enjoyed the romantic ending! I’m not really the action/blow it up macho type! Duh! Hope Sunday clears up for you, My Dear!!
xoxo
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Summer means rain here. Lol! Haves a great night!xo
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I love your vignettes by the shore Rene. They are more beautiful than my memories but after I read, they become visions like memories recalled in quiet times. The artwork is delightful as well.
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Thank you Dan. Iβm glad this struck a chord with you.
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As always. Itβs like a summer vacation at House of Heart.
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So lovely β thank you dear Dan.
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You are welcome Rene and thank you for always being such a wonderful host. The coffee is always hot and the pastries delicate and sweet, but most of all, the poetry and conversations are heavenly. ππβ¨
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Thatβs a beautiful compliment DN, thank you!
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
A GREAT ATMOSPHERE PIECE! AND LOVE THE FILMY FLORAL SKIRT SHE’S WEARING π
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Thank you Jon π
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aah another beautiful poem, missed reading your words!
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I’ve missed you too! Thank you Neha.
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I want to be there too, Holly! π The given alternative is not so famous, and has no romantic touch. π Michael
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Thank you Michael, I wish you serene skies and seas π€
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π€π€ You too, Holly! π€π€
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