I am a lone bird wheeling jagged edges
of ancient cliffs above the shallows
of a rough Dover sea.
My feathers gleam in the beam of
the lighthouse where gentle swells
pulse against hollow bones that in
pale blue dreams you hold tenderly
in your palm like a treasured pearl.
We have abandoned the lighthouse
that seems to lean closer to the sea
waiting in vain at the tide swept shore.
The beam has ceased its search,
still each time I pass by I tip my wing.
Art by R. Simon
Excellent !!! π
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Thank you Paul π
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my pleasure, Holly!!! π
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Wow, Holly. What a gorgeous poem this is.
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Thank you Bojana!
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Sweet, melancholy and a treasure, like your pearl.
I tip my wing to you, Holly! β¦β¦β¦
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Back at you Resa! β¦β¦β¦
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thank you Resa! β¦β¦β¦
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Beautiful image and even more beautiful is the imagery. As I said long ago, this with all its lyrical immediacy will be one of the most hauntingly gorgeous things the world may witness, if played as music or at a reading.
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A lovely compliment, thank you Watt. To do a reading at a poetry slam is a dream of mine!
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Bella illustrazione
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Thank you Soul, so very appreciated!
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ππ good night
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Good night π
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Buona Domenica
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buona giornata π
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Beautiful!!
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Beautiful again. I love your worded symmetries.
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Thank you so much!
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βοΈβοΈπ
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Poesia all’ennesima potenza che racchiude il tutto π
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A beautiful compliment Sher, thank you β€
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Sincero xxx ππΉ
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xxx ππΉ
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Today you post about the shallows, and I about the deep. I loved the coincidence and the poem!
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We are on the same wavelength today, not a bad place to be .
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A very good one!
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Indeed it is! π
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Beautiful! β€
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Beautiful and lyrical β past and present melded together to be softly, slowly pulled asunder. I tip my wing to you, Hollie.
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Thank you Timothy, such a beautiful and encouraging comment. I tip my wing back to you! π¦
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Thank you so much Penny!
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I love the way this poem flows so beautifully, Holly and the fact that hope is still alive. x
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Thank you, i’m glad you liked this, hope lives eternal. x
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Yes, like said above, gorgeous
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Thank you AlexRaphael.
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This is beautiful on a level that’s difficult to describe. The very first line just captures the readers imaginable, in a delicate but familiar way.
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Thank you, such a beautiful comment!
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*imagination!
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Thank you!
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So very beautiful, philosophical and tender.
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Thank you. β€οΈ
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Beautifully done from the birds perspective. π
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Thank you Frank!
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Reblogged this on John Cowgill's Literature Site.
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Thank you John.
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You are welcome, Holly.
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I want you to know I really appreciate your sharing and support of HoH. πΊ
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πΊπΊThank you Holly. I appreciate what HoH does.πΊπΊ
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πΊπΊπΊπΊYOU are very graciously welcome.πΊπΊπΊπΊ
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Ahhhh! Thank you! π
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Ahhhh! YOU are very graciously welcome.
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Love how you take us inside the thoughts of the gull sailing on the off shore breeze. You give us much to think about here Rene. There is this soft dolefulness in the reference to the lighthouse and once held heartbeats now sailing alone.
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Beautiful comment Dan, Thank you!
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I am inspired relentlessly at House of Heart. π
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and I by your fabulous writing Dan, it is mutual. π
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It is mutual Rene. What is better between two people who share an ancient history filled with art, poetry, and literature? Mutual Inspiration is an elixir for artful souls.
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It certainly is! thank you Dan!
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Danke gleichfalls Rene π
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Mit freundlichen GrΓΌΓen, Sie sind so willkommen, Dan.
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Beautiful β₯οΈ
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For a moment, I lived the life of a lone bird. How fantasticππ
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That would be the definition of freedom wouldnβt it? Thank you.
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Absolutely ππ
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Beautiful, Holly! The poem is perfect with the picture, and I can hear the ocean and smell the salt in your words.
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Thank you Merril. πΊ
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You’re very welcome!
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This is beautiful, I felt I was there Holly!π»
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Thank you Elisabet! πΊ
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
THIS POEM IS ANYTHING…BUT SHALLOW! π
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Thank you John π
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Beautiful…
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thank you do much Betty!
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Bette..,sorry , spell ck!
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Thank you Ian.
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A calming swirl of image and sound. It feels like a cool hand on my forehead.
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Iβm so glad you felt this Robert , thank you!
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Reblogged this on Art by Rob Goldstein and commented:
A calming swirl of image and sound from House of Heart
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Thank you Robert, such s lovely comment!
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I saw NO ADS!!!
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Yay! Now Iβm hoping I wasnβt charged twice , I got two receipts back. π
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UCH!! Well, if the receipts look different, it’s probably okay. If they look exact.. check your cc statement. WP will do the good thing. π
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I will ck out the bill. Thank you Resa. Such gross ads, I really had no option π
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I know!! And they really cluttered them around. If I’m having ads on my site, I want to be paid for it, and decide on what and where.
So glad you liked the Gi sketch! β€
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Exactly. I love the Gi sketch, it’s gorgeous. β€
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Key Speaker… I sent her the words for her to approve.
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You are on top of this, I can’t wait!
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thank you xo much Chuck. You are not in my reader or mail, I hope I havenβt missed too much. I will be over to read you today. xo
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You are so welcome, My Dear! I think WP made a huge error awhile back because I have been having to add those I have followed for years back. I see a “Follow” button and go “What?” and have to follow again! In fact, I think I had to do that with you. I would be honored to have you following me!! (again) Ha! Hope your week is going well??
xoxoxo
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I will always be following dear Chuck. Yes, something went haywire with WP, one of the issues is that as you say every time I visit a blog that I have followed for years the “follow” button appears again and again. It’s as though it is not going through. So sorry my dear friend, but I will follow till my follow fingers give out. π
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I guess we are in the same boat with WP!! I’ve been doing the same thing. I will contact them tomorrow and find out what the heck is going on!! You are always to sweet!! Have a happy day, My Dear!!
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Lots of birds lately Miss Heart. I hope you would tip your wing if you pass me on your travels.
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Most definitely will Mr. Cake. Thank you for visiting, if you should pass by a Red Robin be kind. π
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Always Miss Heart.
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C’est trΓ¨s beau Holly! J’adore π
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Merci, bisous! π
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This is gorgeous, Holly.
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Thank you Robbie!
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Breathtaking and beautifully well written poem. π The art work is perfect.
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Thank you so much Charlieβ π
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You are so welcome, Holly. π
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Have a great day Charlie π
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Bless you so much. π
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Thank you Charlie!
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You are welcome, Holly. π
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Reblogged this on johncoyote and commented:
Amazing poetry and artwork by a talented writer.
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Artwork and words. Amazing.
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Thank you so much John.
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You are welcome my friend.
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Excellent. I love lighthouses. π
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Thank you, me too!
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Lovely poem. The ending is sublime.
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Thank you Diana!
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