In the hushed silence between waves
sighs fill the night as stars come alive
and the breeze is a soft poem.
Nude in the moon light but for drifting
shadows the swirl in your glass keeps
perfect time with far off thunder.
I need to look away from your gun powder eyes
that lethal shot
before the fluttering of a thousand butterflies
betray me.
I breathe in the circlets of your cigarette and
the honey sweet scent of willing hostages.
As fragile as fireflies we escape to the madness of
our minds where all we have to do is live.
Liliana Gigovic
Good one! The imagery and the action lead to multiple interpretations.
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Thank you Robert
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You’re welcome ๐
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Living has its joys… like this poem, Holly. Chapeau! ๐ xoxoxoxo
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Thank you Marina ๐คxo
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xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
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xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo ๐
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Thank you. ๐
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My pleasure
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Exquisitely lush and delicious, Holly!
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Thank you so much Dale!
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Beautiful like you, Holly!
Sometimes, after reading your words, I have no words… just a sigh and moments of luxurious amazement.
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Thank you dear Resa ๐น
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Wonderful poem. I love the painting.
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Thanks so much Tim. I love this painting. The layered oils are beautiful.
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Lush and romantic, Holly. I like the painting, too. ๐
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Thank you Merril ๐
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I did it!!! https://artgowns.com/2019/11/09/princess-blue-holly-to-the-rescue/
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Fabulous! ๐ฅโญ๏ธ
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I breathe in the circlets if youโre cigarette – beautiful
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Thank you so much!
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I donโt think Lord Byron or William Blake could make romantic poetry like this. Perhaps John Keats could have had he lived. No, it takes that heart you possess, Rene, to turn words into magic sighs on the beach in Jamaica that has attended to countless loves since the world first set anchor offshore.
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Thatโs so beautiful Dan, thank you so much.
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I thank you as well Rene. Yesterday was the best day Iโve had in several years on the trail. I was actually able to run part of the way. I clocked 11 miles up in the mountains and was feeling awesome and then came home and read your poem. Negril just finished the day on a beautiful note.
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Bravo and hat’s off! That is great news. It’s a wonderful time of year to be out on the trail. A evening in Negril would be a perfect way to wind down. Thank you so much for the lovely words Dan.
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Yes, exactly. I find this odd fall has still gifted us with perfect days and a late cascade of color. Iโm happy to report all the flora and fauna I observed were healthy and happy as was I. That beach scene tho, what an exquisite way for me to finish my day. โค๏ธ
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A perfect scenario, there’s nothing so refreshing as a dip in the ocean at the end of a long hike unless it’s a trip to the spa. โค
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Woo hooo! Long hike, ocean dip, and next day spa time. I think I could develop an addiction to that. I finally gave in to therapeutic massage and then had to ask myself why I hadnโt made it part of my wellness program all along. Itโs never to late to start ๐.
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It’s really amazing how helpful a therapeutic massage is in rehabilitation. By all means, go for it.
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Definitely! Iโm finding mainstream medicine is embracing proven alternative treatments here in ole Alabama, which Iโm all for because it has definitely worked for me. Iโm also learning essential oil therapy. My goal is to become a dark Gothic steampunk vampire alchemist. ๐ง๐ปโโ๏ธ๐ฆโ๏ธ
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Iโm sure you will be a fine gothic alchemist! I have a friend who is very into essential oils , I havenโt tried them๐งโโ๏ธ
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If you arenโt sensitive to scents, you might like essential oils. I have made soap, first aid antiseptic, muscle soreness, and bug repellent for my outdoor adventures with all natural ingredients. I can do a lot more but those were my priorities. They work great. No harsh chemicals and no bad smells. Of course, itโs possible I donโt smell exactly normal to the wildlife but Iโve noticed the deer, squirrels, and chipmonks donโt seem to mind the moving spice garden in their neighborhood. ๐
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You’re too funny. I am not a fan of strong scents. I’m sure the woodland critters will get used to you ๐
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I think as long as the bears are grinning, Iโm good. ๐ป๐๐ฟ. Get your friend to make something for you in a carrier oil to try. They make very small, 2 ml, drip, or roller ball applicators you can use to see if you like it. The carrier oil thins out the scent considerably and slows evaporation so you get the benefits without a strong scent. My therapist uses it for deep tissue massage and that hard plastic roller so popular with physical therapists. That roller is such exquisite pain. Too bad de Sade didnโt have plastic roller tubes in his day. He might have taken a totally different direction with his fascination with pain. The ladies donโt mind it at all, but us boys scream like fingers stuck in a car door. ๐
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If itโs good enough for De Sade itโs good enough for me. ๐คญ
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Waaa haa haaa! Next time you strain your back or leg muscles get it rolled out. Youโll never go back to Motrin and all those smelly rubs. When your therapist says, โIโll get those glutes for you,โ you can smile and tell the ole Marquis he was born too soon. ๐๐งโโ๏ธ
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Suddenly I feel the need to visit the spa.
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Always listen to your inner voice, especially when she tells you itโs spa time ๐
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Excellent advice ๐
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Some things just make sense. ๐
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They do.
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Ah yes! ๐
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Thank you Ogden ๐
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Just beautiful!
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Thank you!
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Beautiful painting. Good Sunday ๐บ
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Good Sunday! Greetings and thank you so much Soul.
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Reblogged this on Peter on Mars and commented:
Bellรญsimo…
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Thank you Peter, so very appreciated
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Lots of pictures are flying by while reading your words. They are like circling around the actual story. Wonderfully written, Holly!
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Thank you Erika, thatโs a lovely thought! โค๏ธ
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You know your poems always make me fly away ๐
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Don’t fly too far! โค ๐
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Holly, painted by the hand of a masterful writer!
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Thatโs a lovely compliment Lance, youโre own writing is superb. Thank you !
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Youโre so very welcome, Holly!
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Thank you Lance
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So very very good, Holly. Another astonishing poem.
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Thank you so much Diana.
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As always. Perfection. The color of his eyes…love it.
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Thank you Gigi! The lethal dose. ๐
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Thank you Chuck
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Always a pleasure sharing your words, My Dear!!
xoxo ๐๐นโจ๐
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xoxo
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Amazing poetry by a talented writer.
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Thanks so much John, ๐บ
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Wonderful poetry shared dear Poet.
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Thank you John!
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You are welcome dear friend.
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Thank you, so very appreciated John
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Thank you kindly!
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You grabbed me with the hush silence between the waves that covered me with imagery and metaphors. Powerful words!
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Lovely, thank you Frank
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“where all we have to do is live”? Not always that simple. ๐
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It can be! ๐
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You always makes me smile. ‘Love your fighting spirit. ๐ Merci Coeur de Feu.
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One must make it so dear Brian. Thank you for the beautiful comments ๐ค
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You are have a purple patch Miss Heart. Lucky duck.
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I will probably wander out of it soon but Iโm happy you think Iโm there at the moment.
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You are Miss Heart.
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Thank you , your encouragement is appreciated Mr. Cake.
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Reblogged this on John Cowgill's Literature Site.
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Thank you John!
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You are welcome, Holly!!!
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Ahh! You know I love flowers! Thank you John! ๐น
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๐น๐นAhh! You are very graciously welcome oh very lovely Holly! I enjoy giving you flowers.๐น๐น๐น
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GETS THAT INNER SOUL…RIGHT HERE! โค
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Thank you dear Jon โค
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MOST WELCOME, YOU ALWAYS ARE โค โค
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(And thanks for the emailed encouragement) โค โค โค โค
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โค๏ธโค๏ธ o Hope youโre feeling great
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Thank you Jon
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