You are my obsession
undulating waves of fixation
that can not be restrained.
What I know of you
I have learned through osmosis
the taste of ozone I crave
like breathing air.
Beauty only knows to
be beautiful, send me a
signal through the blackout.
Take my hand and let
me land in your warmth
for I am shivering.
It is always raining here,
I am nothing but precipitation
slipping down your skin.
This is an entire album…you might want to stop it at 4:24.
This was exquisite.
And that music… thank you for introducing it to me…
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Thank you Dale, I recently happened on this album, it is beautiful.
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As was your poem…
It touches me particularly as the guy I love is out of my reach.
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💗
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😘
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😘
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WOW wow wow
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Ah! Thank you Yassy!
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I really like the poem. Great song.
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Thank you Tim. 😊
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Sensuality i find in this poem 😉
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Merci mon ami Gyslaine!
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Great!!
Congratulations
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Thank you , I’m glad you liked this poem.
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It is your merit. it’s a good job. really good. Congratulations
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Thank you so much, a lovely compliment!
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
SHE IS …OUR….POETRY OBSESSION! “LET ME LAND IN YOUR WARMTH…” A GREAT DESCRIPTIVE LINE! ❤
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Thank you John, so appreciated!
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Yer welcome!
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I can feel the cold rain and long for someone’s warmth! 😀 This poem makes me ACTUALLY FEEL the coldness!
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You’re too kind and generous Jon, I do appreciate it! 🙂
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Just analysis…or maybe its the temperature outside! 😀
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you are funny! 🙂
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Occasionally….!
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❤
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Your writing is always so vivid and immediate. Obsession, unable to restrain oneself. Beautiful poem.
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Im glad you liked this poetry Gi! Thank you!
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You’re fabulous.
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Ahhh! You are too!
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Geez… your endless metaphors, words drawing pictures and pictures painting urgency; yet, gentle waves of peace that have passed anticipation complete themselves wrapped in a warmth of love you hold out for us to engage in.
Brilliant!
Great tune, Holly!
I began my comment listening to it, and ended it to it!
xo
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Thank you Resa, you’re comments are so beautiful, a poem, you are are a gifted poetess among so many other genres!
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Well, you bring it out of me! xo
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It’s all you! xo
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That last bit is delish. And I did also love that poem you shared recently but the comments had closed. Always pure class on your blog.
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Thank you so much Shey! ♥️
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Sublime, Holly. I read this one with the “raining” music in the background. Words cannot express…
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Your comments are so wonderful for my esteem dear Diana! Thank you so much!
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ha ha ha. I’m just enjoying myself.
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Carry on ❤️
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Lovely symbolic verse here ! 🙂
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Your very kind Muscles, your support is very appreciated.
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Excellent post my friend.
Cheers.
Soul.
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Thank you Soul. Cheers!
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Beautiful! Love the song as well, lush strings and great build up.
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Thank you Mr. Cake, lovely comment. I really love the first song on this link, So Far-So Close. I haven’t gotten to the rest yet what with saving lives and all 🙂 . I appreciate the boost to my self esteem as well.
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I think you have had a bit of a purple patch lately, though I know how difficult self esteem and motivation can be when it comes to writing. But keep on keeping on, especially with the saving lives but. The song, definitely in my wheelhouse, thanks for the introduction.
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Your generous comments are always motivating, thank you Mr. Cake.
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My pleasure as always.
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“…slipping precipitation nothing raining shivering warmth”
they ring back and forth in my ears like a fond heartbeat.
❤️
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Marina, you are such a sweetheart, I love your comments, they make my day. ❤
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Oh, but you make my day… every day, Holly! xoxo
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Oh, I’m bursting with happy! You are too sweet. xoxo
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…good!!!!! Likewise! :-)xoxo
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That makes me feel great xoxo
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xoxoxo
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thank you Chuck xo
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An honor to share with followers, Holly
xoxo
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It’s my honor , thank you Chuck xoxo
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Chuck, thank you! Have a wonderful day!
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I really like your blog. A pleasure to come stroll on your pages. A great discovery and very interesting blog. I come back to visit you. Do not hesitate to visit my universe. A soon.
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Interesting blog you have there! Thank you for visiting, I hope you’ll rerun and browse anytime.
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