I steer my boat
beneath the lacy moss of
cedar trees where a lark drapes
her song, a spray of flowers, along
the whispering stream.
Beyond the shallows a wooden bridge
where we cast our secrets to the water,
goldenrod along the bank witness the
breathless embrace of lovers.
So blue were your eyes those summer days,
how endlessly deep the longing.
art by Steve Hanks
Beautiful.
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Thank you so much MIke.
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Very beautiful.
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Thank you so much Luis.
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A beautifully visual and sensuous painting with words.
I’m in the breathless embrace of this poem. ❦
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Thank you for the lovely comment dear Resa ❤️
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Such brilliant tender language! Heartfelt and bittersweet – can picture the scene perfectly 🙂
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Thank you so much Tom, such a beautiful compliment, I appreciate it very much !
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Reblogged this on John Cowgill's Literature Site.
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Thank you John 🌹
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🌹🌹🌹YOU are very welcome Holly!!!🌹🌹🌹
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Thank you once again!🌹🌹🌹
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🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹You are very graciously welcome once again.🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
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Lovely romantic lyrics Rene in a gentle flowing memory Southern gondola style. 🛶
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Thank you Dan, I’m feeling very much the southern belle tonight. 🙂
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Awesome! You wear the title well. 🌹
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not really Dan. The cutoff line is Ft. Lauderdale.
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Oh my! I didn’t know a line of debarkation was established. Not many people know that southern belles were tough as forged iron even in a hoop dress. My grandmother home schooled me on manners straight from an original printing of Amy Vanderbilts’ The Complete Book of Etiquette. In there was explicit instructions on how I, as a young gentleman, would properly address our southern belles. It did not mention that I would sustain serious verbal injury and latter corporal punishment if I violated those rules. We learned the hard way in those days.
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You turned out great Dan. I’m all to familiar with the book of etiquette, remember I was taught well by my southern belle Grandma. All due respect to her for raising six kids and then taking me on. She was a grand lady. 🤗
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Our grandmother’s were the real deal and you turned out pretty doggone awesome to the max yourself. When I was being my naughty little self, my grandmother would remind me that she may be a lady but she had a strong right arm, which was to remind me my rascally bottom was going to feeeeel the Pow’r. Grand mother’s are the best.
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They truly are !
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😘👵🏼
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Yeah!
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Love the “lark drapes her song” Great work!
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Thank you so much, I did kind of like that image myself, smiles!
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Gorgeous!
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Thank you Dale.
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Such lovely imagery
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Thank you , I’m glad you liked this.
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The picture you painted with your words was so rich in colors and emotions, Holly… ❤🤗❤
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Thank you Marina ❤️🤗❤️
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😍😘😍
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🤗🥰
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❤🤗❤
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❤️🌺💞
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Not only beautifully done, I feel like I was there.
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Thank you Frank!
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Holly, I love the metaphor “where we cast our secrets to the water.” It reveals an intimacy of thoughts and a shared experience. Keith
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Thank you for reading and the lovely comment Keith!
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Stunning, Holly. I could feel the longing.
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Thank you Diana. I read your great book review, it fabulous, my indie stack is sky high ! I have to get to a pc to tell you how much I enjoy and appreciate your great blog.
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An endlessly beautiful stream of writing, Holly.
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Such a lovely comment Syl, thank you.
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You’re very welcome, always.
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wonderfull 🙂
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Thank you dear Ghyslaine 😊
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Beautiful
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Thank you
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😊
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😊
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The melancholy nostalgia is strong in this one. Beautiful.
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Thank you so much, such a lovely comment, a bit mild for my taste but sometimes you just feel dreamy.
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Indeed and it is good to have the talent to convey a range of mood and emotions.
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It’s all in the mood and emotions for sure, be it for good or bad. Thank you Mr. C.
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That is definitely the truth.
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You do pick your art well to fit your words… 🙂
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😊
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